I hope you're gonna return to this story one day and finish it.

Oh my gosh please update this!

wow, dean is definitely the big bad wolf

Oh holy hell. I'm dead. Gone to hell and loved it. Oh how I wish there was a second chapter or more to this! This was just perfection. Beautiful in all the D&S and bad wolf/good girl aspects. I would read a book made out of this, for real!

very exciting. great job

this story really is good, I cant wait to see what all dean has in store for this girl. update soon, please!

oh dear god please write more damn that was good, i love a dominant demanding man especially a gorgeous one like dean ambrose

OMG this story is just...asdfghjkl! I know this was a one shot but I need more! Please!

Hi, I love your stories. I know this is meant to be a one shot but really hope you write more of it.

I know I've told you on Tumblr how I feel about this fic, but I need to say it again. I am here for it, all the time, any time of day, I am here for all of this. Twisted little fairy tales are sort of my *thing*, as you know, and man...this is great. You write so well, you really set up the environment so perfectly that you can just drop yourself right into it. And he's so deliciously RAUNCHY, ugh god yes this is great.

Seriously the amazingness of this story really blows my mind. Such amazing detail and it's really captivating. I usually only read romance or drama on here, so I've always been hesitant to read another genre, but you definitely did this fantasy justice. I could picture everything as I read it and that doesn't happen too much. I love it and I was disappointed when I got to the end cus you stopped it right there. I know it's suppose to be a one-shot but I hope you add another chapter to this because it's amazing.

Love the way you wrote Dean. He's so gruff and rigid and almost intoxicating that it hurts cus of course, I can't have him. Not to mention the though of him actually chopping some wood with no shirt on and being all sweaty, hot, musky and masculine UNF! And the way he talked to her? Saying that she was a bad girl and that he would teach her to be a good girl. Then I really didn't expect that berry scene. Just putting them in her and leaving her there. I don't know what it is, but that was a turn on.

Outstanding job on this story. Damn, I may have to read that again because I'm definitely addicted to this. Great writing. I loved it.

Well aren't you becoming quite the smut queen? All I can say is I don't know how you do it but your writing absolutely mesmerises me. You turn such an innocent fairy-tale concept into something so deliciously naughty and freaking hot! The way you write Ambrose makes me like him just a little bit more each time...if that's even possible. Great as always hun.

You really are such an incredible writer. That whole chapter was so perfectly written, with how everything was described, Emmys innocence in all this and how you write Ambrose.. Ugh it's all so perfect. Looking forward to the next one :)

You know I love everything you write and this is no exception. I'll just be sitting her, waiting impatiently for the next part.

You write Ambrose so perfectly.

You are a terrific writer, I really thoroughly enjoyed this.

I don't know how you got such a different original idea with this story, but I'm glad you did. This really was a fantastically piece of written work.

I love Dean as a mean asshole. What. !

Loved it!