Please update soon, I love it and I've got my fingers crossed. it's a wonderful book

Is there any chance you will finish this story? It is so unique andso different from the hundreds of ff I have read. If I had one more Christmas wish I would wish you to complete the story. So...please?!

. NO. I was warned that this story was incomplete, I was well aware that there would probably be a cliffhanger, but I was expecting a minor one. THIS IS VERY MUCH MAJOR! omg I live this story so much! I just got here today but I'm so emotional invested in this! Ahhh! Anyways I realize that you're definitely busy if you haven't had the time to update, so I'm not going to pester you to update, but just so you know, people are still reading this. Idk why that's realavent bc I don't really have a point but YA KNOW. anyways I'm like head over heels in love with this story! OK this is getting long bye

I hate it when I find amazing incompleted fanfics :(

I'm Cal. Seriously I got lost on my way to school once

Really good chapter, I like how everything is progressing forwards now

Was that harry appearing from the flames? If it was, BAD HARRY, YOU DO NOT INCINERATE PEOPLE! *Squirts water*. Poor Unspeakables, but then again, that's what you get when you don't listen to whispers through the veil, tsk, tsk.

Oh my word, Ash and Cal! Cal was in the first fic, right? I can't actually really remember but I do with Ash! And so it all truly begins :P.

I liked the chapter, hope you update soon :D.

There is a reason why it took me so long to read this... IT'S BECAUSE I'D ALREADY READ IT BEFORE.
Idk how, bUT I HAD READ THIS BEFORE.

Okay well, I re-read the entire thing, and everything came back and I just yeah, wow.

A lot of things were a bit confusing and too OOC like Draco being friends with everyone else and especially Remus, since in the books he was very disgusted by Remus's appearance and state, but I guess he's grown up and stopped being a right prick.

Other than that, I have read this story before so it all clicked as soon as I reached chapter 4, as to why this sounded so familiar; cause I've read it before xD
Maybe on your other account that you had it on?

Still, amazing story, I can't wait for an update :D

Oh my goodness, where do I begin? :O

First of all, I adore your writing so much. I love the way you express things, I love love the phrases and I love the fact that this is pre-war, so Harry's still in his "need to save the world" mode.

I cannot tell you how many times I laughed, solely on this first chapter as well. I am hooked, utterly and fully hooked. I am going to read more of this, and I have a feeling you're going to wreck my feels, so I'm going to need a lot of tissues to wipe those tears.

As for the smut, it hit home. It felt like a real first time, like so real that it reminded me of my first time I gave a guy a blowjob. And that's what matters; being real.

Absolutely brilliant, I loved it. *runs off to read more whilst laughing sadistically for the smut and hurt that is going to come next*

Oooh, damn it, Draco. Can't you wait like, I don't know, a few days? Keep playing chess with Ron? Keep laughing? Stuff like that? Just for a little while?

Damn it, I hope Harry makes it in time.

Draco should tell the old man where to SHOVE his order to keep away from Harry. Its none of the old mans business what the two of them do. If they want to hang out, and sometimes shag each others brains out during the war, its nobodys business except their own and the old man has no right to be butting in and telling them to stop. If THEY want to stop, it will be THEIR decision, not HIS, and theirs nothing short of casting imperious on them is going to make them stop if they don't wanna.

Oooh, this is getting really interesting, what with Harry having to jump dimensions and what's going to happen with Draco next. Very exciting :D.

Harry's part was much better. I liked it :).

Aww, Luna's dead? Why!? That's so sad *Pouts*

How did Ron take the situation? Of Draco being able to hear Harry.

I liked the ending of the chapter, how Draco is urging Harry to get back. It's interesting how everyone thinks Draco is a nutjob, which I can see why.

Also, I'm so happy you've updated! I felt like that was a quick one, yay! :D.

love love love
:).