Good job. I really enjoyed it. Deb

It's nice to see Ned and Veronica get their chance. What's also great is that the others are supportive and right there to help.

Thanks!

Excellent. Always wanted Ned and Veronica to get together. If only it could have been.

Liked it very much. Maybe you could do A similar one on Marguerite and Roxton

Better than the other pregnancy story further up the list here.
I guess you are a mother yourself?
A bit too predictable and clichéd at times but your dialogue is not bad. It actually gives an insight in the character's feelings at times.

A nice little story. Simplistic perhaps but nicely done.

Sorry, but this is not great. Very predictable and terribly clichéd. The dialogue lacks insight and is childishly written. A nice idea but poorly executed.

A sweet story. Logical that Challenger WOULD learn what he could to assist his family. Look forward to more.

This is a great story. I really enjoyed reading it
why do people, have to use this to slander, one another? It is for people to do something they enjoy. It really pathetic. Overall thanks for a wonderful story dolphinrain. Keep them coming. You have a great talent, and keep me on my seat!
THANKS!

Word does get about.
Haven't laughed so much in ages.
These atrocious stories you talk of smacks of double standards.
You berate anyone who dares to call your writing atrocious yet think it's ok for you to the same and call other authors atrocious.
It's delusional and unrealistic to think that everyone will love your writing. Big learning curve for you.
You don't with your voracious replies. You have a reputation now, so will attract flamers and trolls.
You can't silence them with the quality of your writing either.
You have a lot to learn.
I am not anonymous or afraid of you.

Sorry in case this show up as guest and it gets posted twice.
GROW UP!
This goes for "Guest" who is trolling/flaming you. Ignore it, rise above it but don't feed it by reacting.
But also goes for you Dolphinrain. Your behavior is as bad, show some integrity and stop feeding the troll. Instead of spouting on about freaking great you are, show us.
You are a reasonable writer of fanfic but all the arguing etc is unprofessional and dumb.
Get your head out of the clouds, don't believe what everyone tells you. Have self belief and by all means but temper it with a big dose of reality.
I wish you well.

This was a sweet story.

Yes, Challenger would learn whatever he could to tend Veronica and the baby. That would be his nature regarding his friends/Treehouse family.
Yes, Marguerite's speech may sound American but as far as Americanisms this story is more or less than the series was. These points are valid but should not take away from the story itself as that is not the main purpose or focus of the story. Ned and Veronica are the main focus here.
The guest who is making these reviews needs to come out of anonymity if you have issues with my stories. If you don't like the story, that's fine, I don't expect to please everyone but again I say I write as a fan of the series for fans. Also I ask there are other fanfictions written here that are far worse with terrible grammar and sentence structure. I do not refer to authors for whom English is not the first language. I ask why are those atrocious stories given some of the best reviews
I WILL continue to write as I am inspired to do so. The fact that one of my stories has over 21,000 views and 89 positive reviews would argue I have potential. Also I have had contact with an individual having personal connections with a series who praised my work and encouraged me to continue writing.
I apologize to any Brits for my use of Americanisms with non-American characters. If you have any suggestions to help me improve, p.m. me directly on this site as I am willing to learn.

A good family piece. I enjoyed how everyone stepped in to help the expectant parents. I especially liked Challenger's tenacity in getting the baby breathing. Very much in character. All the characters are spot on and each were used well. It will be interesting to see how the Treehouse family adjusts to the new arrival. A sweet story indeed.

this is a very good plot. Very intense. i love how a kiss upon the forehead. nothing like fatherhood.
keep writing dolphinrain you have a wonderful talent.