Nice its better :) continue writing

These chapters are getting so much and way much better. And thank you for adding a sweet chapter for JS

This story is good but i dont understand the plot of it but it is still good. And nice how you put a little cute JS scene :) i hope to see more

This seems a play . Very good . I like the frienship of the team .

Its getting better each chapter. Nice chapters keep writing!

Okay, so this is a "somewhat" different story...liked the idea. A few spelling miscues, but overall started out as an interesting read. Thanks for adding another story including the whole group as a family! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Great story but you sould write some about Jack and Samantha. And make the chapters longer