Absolutely loved it! You handled everything so perfectly!

This is really good just found this today. Can't wait for the next update.

Wow this story is amazing! I found it two days ago and just finished reading it. This probably won't do me any good on my exam next week but who cares. It was super satisfying to read! I look forward to reading the next chapter!

I love how you build on what we already know about alchemy. So far you've asked all the right questions and given satisfying answers, such as what the philosopher's stone is actually made of besides human souls, the solution fit so well with both 'our world' and the rules of alchemy, it was mindblowing. What Kai had to do to get out of Truth's domain, as well as her thinking about the way alchemy supposedly works, are also incredibly believable. The character development and the pacing of the story is so good. And I love that people in Amestris do not actually speak English. I think I have seen only one other fanfiction do that, which was a cross-over between FMA and The Avengers. It makes total sense that people from other dimensions would not speak English. All in all, I think that your story is really good and really realistic, as far as stories about alternate dimensions and containing alchemy can be realistic :)

I can see how much thought, time and effort you've put into this story. I really admire you for this. I hope you will still continue writing this story. I'm going to stick with you until the final chapter. There aren't that many high quality fanfics out there, they have to be cherished at all costs! Which reminds me, in one of your earlier chapter's author's note's you mentioned that you wanted this story to be similar in quality to The Blood Alchemist, I think you've gone above and beyond the quality of that story.

Good luck with whatever else it is you do in life! (I think you are attending uni?) And stay safe and healthy!

oh the time hit may 2020 man kai went thru the ringer but she is so lucky she missed out on corona

Hi! I remember first finding this story (both in its initial and rewritten version) some years ago, and I honestly forgot about this for a while (blame college and the hell it brings). Then I recently came across "Rewriting Fiction" days ago and rereading it somehow helped me feel better as I deal with my mental issues and currently crappy life (clichè, buuuuut yeah that's just how it is). I'd say reading this was like taking the breather I didn't realize I needed. You story is one of the very few fictional pieces that are precious to me and no words can really express how thankful I am that you continue to write this. I hope you and your family are safe and doing well right now!

I wouldn't feel pressure for writing romantic things well enough. This Chapter proves you have the skill to write moving, intelligent romance with two people who genuinely enjoy each other's company. Karmyn's conflict between her bond with the Elrics and Al and wanting to continue on through life came through poignantly too, and I look forward to seeing how it continues to develop. This Chapter was so well done that, since I hadn't - I actually finished this Chapter weeks ago and am just now Reviewing it because I'm getting further back into FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST, at least temporarily - looked at much FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST Fanfiction for a while, it, combined with the skill you've written much of the rest of your story, enabled me to feel like I was coming home to FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST after a long time away.

Though part of that could have also been the mood I was in when I looked at this. Still, it was partially your story. Thank you for providing such a moving experience.

And hooray for cliffhanger Chapter endings!

I'm still hoping to talk with you one of these days. Based on the quality of your writing, I believe I could have interesting discussions about FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST with you.

And it's good to know this year was much better.

Paul

"I made my resolve two years ago. I swore to overcome any hardship I may face."-Ashelia "Ashe" B'nargin Dalmasca
"Man cannot live on resolve alone, Princess."-Ffamran "Balthier"
FINAL FANTASY XII

I followed this fic over from ao3 because I thought the concept was super interesting and I wanted to read more immediately and I'm so glad I did! I really love this story so far. The plot is interesting and your OCs in the first part were lovely and I love Kai a lot. Her interactions with the FMA cast are great, and I think she and Al are really cute together. It's also wonderful to see how your writing progressed over the years, and I was definitely feeling nostalgia while reading the chapters you published years ago. They're charming with the quintessential early 2010s high school SI/OC vibes that I loved to read back then and don't see often anymore. I can tell that this fic is near and dear to your heart and that you've poured a lot of love into it over the years; it truly is lovely. Thank you so much for sharing this fic with us 3

ahhh! please tell me there's more almyn coming up. it's been so many years and i just want them to be together already! that being said, thank you so much for not giving up on this story. your dedication and storytelling make waiting worth it :)

Finally read this chapter! Agh, it hurt so bad... but it really felt right for things to play out that way.

Couldn't finish my last letter, accidentally posted review ... .

Anyways, where was I..? Oh yes, y'see there was never really a reason for me to care about Karmyn to begin with, and after having to read about 22 chapters made me tired me out rather than give me a reason to care. I feel like it just dragged on and bebeing spoon fed with information about her that by the time she met Truth, I couldn't care less.

I feel like her other friend could've made more for an interesting character other than her. She just seemed to have more personality than her.

Anyways, this was just my two cents about your story, please do not take any offense onto it because I was mainly trying to be constructive in my criticism. Thank you and Happy Holidays.

Hello there, new fan into this story.
I have to say, your writing is really amazing and there's this thing about it that really draws me in. I really like it so much but I'm afraid I'm going to have to stop reading it.

See here, I've only managed to reach up to Ch.22 and I know that's where things get interesting, but I can't find myself it within myself to care anymore.

I read in ANs that this story is supposed to be about Karmyn and her adventures and that was all a setup up to this, but, all this setup got me bored.

Ooooh. Things are getting intense! :o Man... I'm sad about everyone going their separate ways, but it'll be super interesting how she interacts with Riza and all that jazz. I seriously hope Al doesn't fall for Mei! He should be with Karmyn! I look forward to your next update. Even if it happens to be a year xD I know that life, though. Wanting it to be perfect. I've run into that problem myself. I'm rootin' for ya!

Thank you for the update. I completely forgot about this fic for the longest time and you made my day. it was beautiful and really captured the feelings that are sometimes so difficult to convey. It was beautiful!

When a story suddenly appears again and its still good

Welcome back! I'm so happy to see you update!