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Great Story. That Moment when Bowser gave Luigi the Sword was when i suddenly recaped the story Peach told and i was just like "Wait... Luigi is going to die isn't he? Ah feck."

omg the feels why T.T beautiful story

This fic made me tear up real bad and i love it ;w;
This was a great fic, and i'm most definitely going to read the sequel!

Sorry, I didn't realise there was another chapter, heh heh! Really looking forward to the sequel, I bet it'll be as good as this!

If good fanfics are gems then this is a diamond. This is undoubtedly the best Mario fic on this site. I just read all twenty chapters in the last hour and a half, and I can't put into words how much I enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work, because you're a really talented writer. :-)

This was a really good fiction. I do wonder what Daisy did in those five years, though. How was she able to keep her daughter a secret?

I wish that Luigi didint die, but knowing that everything changed for the good at the end and Daisy coming back with Luigi's child, it made me happy! :) Love your story!

This is the best story ever, the ending made me satisfied. Great Story!

I still wish it wasn't so sad...Believe me though as much as I loved it...I still wish Luigi hadn't died...it just doesn't sit right with me y'know...I do have one little criticism. Drama/Friendship just doesn't strike me as a sad story so...(trying not to sound rude because its harder to type constructive criticism than to say it) you might want to consider changing that genre for this story...

I had to read the first part a couple of times cause I was crying too much to see..

No! Luigi! man i'm actually crying WHY! such a sad ending...

error. I meant chap three

I can't believe no one commented on it yet. but I love how the tale told in chap 5 is later represented by the brothers

Awww... Love the ending. I Love this story so much.

What a nice happy ending :)