Reviews for How to make a family
Guest chapter 9 . 9/19/2018
here this a great story keep it goi g
JOEYDRAGON chapter 1 . 7/31/2018
Love it keep up the good work
Guest chapter 9 . 2/14/2018
This is supose to be swanqueen but there is no interaction between them the stupid sex between belle ruby and emma needs to stop already
Dovahkiin1503 chapter 9 . 7/7/2017
So far this is a great story and quite unique as well. There is a lot of character development in this, the relationship as a whole is realistic though in my eyes Snow would be rather opposed to this relationship. Charming is a lot more open about these things as compared to Snow, but that is just my view.

As for ideas for oneshots, why not make one between Emma/Belle, one between Emma/Ruby and Emma/Regina. I am not a fan of the whole SwannQueen shipping (as I see them more as best friends and since the last two episodes of season 6 along with Zelena), but I can see why people like them together.

I myself have an idea for a HP/OUAT crossover with the pairing being Harry/Belle. I cannot figure out why no-one has thought about this pairing before. Besides the second half of season 6 I cannot figure out why Belle constantly forgives Rumplestilsken and goes back to him.
QueenLana15 chapter 8 . 5/1/2017
Without Belle in the mix, I think this would be a RedSwanQueen story. Although that whole swingers thing between the two couples would work too.
QueenLana15 chapter 9 . 4/30/2017
Well, I'm waiting for Emma and Regina. Emma has caught her crying. Emma has to find out what Regina is crying about and fuck her too. Obviously, a baby or three means each lady has to get pregnant. A two or three weeks can pass, both Belle and Ruby have missed their monthly and they are wondering why. Your flashbacks can be about Regina and Emma's first time and each of their consecutive times, until present when Regina and Emma confess their love for each other and Regina's infertility curse is broken and she gets pregnant.
Just to let you know, I'm a beta reader and often help with writer's block. If you ever want to talk about your story, just PM me and we can talk out the issue, so you can back to your story.
Can't wait to see what happens! Please update soon.
Kigo Queen chapter 9 . 3/10/2017
I just cannot wait for more! And I am confused on why I'm not following this. I am now! Please update soon! I suck at prompts, but your doing great!
FaBbEr0oZ chapter 9 . 2/25/2017
Unfortunately I'm only a reader and not a writer. Wish I could help though
d'evilregal chapter 9 . 2/17/2017
First off I like where this is going. As for input what if you made ruby & bell a couple and Regina and Emma one but they were swingers? Or the 4 of them could all be in a relationship together? Or you could keep a Emma ruby and bell together and bring maleifecent in to the story for Regina? Or combined some of theses ideas, Which ever way you go is cool with me xx please update soon
MIROjrsygrl chapter 9 . 2/11/2017
Woo hoo. Looking forward to reading. Thanks for sticking with us.
Dark Yellow Dino chapter 9 . 2/6/2017
go more into the relationship between them
ReigningQueenOfCrime chapter 9 . 2/6/2017
So glad your back! Your stories were sorely missed. I have a few regina/bella ideas if you wanna try them out. Good luck with your block they really are the worse.
fallenangel1396 chapter 9 . 2/5/2017
your an amazing writer and as I said in you other story I can't wait to see this updated and continued. If you need someone to bounce ideas of I'm happy to help.
Desperate chapter 8 . 11/24/2016
Please Please Please update I have read your other books and I loved them so much just as I love this book so much but please you can't keep leaving me like this you need to update! I love this so much though 3 I commented on "There's a new Alpha in town, partner " to, I don't remember if I used the same name as the one I am using now but PLEASE UPDATE THEM! Thank you for the amazing mind you have! 3
kpop1392as chapter 8 . 4/6/2016
Oooo I really hope that Regina and Emma find her/their happiness soon too. Also, I'm not sure but does Regina currently have feelings for Emma and she just doesn't recognize it yet?

I enjoy reading this story a lot. I like that Granny and David are supportive of their relationship and that Henry is too.
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