Reviews for The Punk Hazard Crisis
EffBO94 chapter 45 . 4/26
Luffy and Zoro giving the "she's my girlfriend don't u even think about doing that again u brat" talk was hilarious the thought of Zoro sticking his legendary Kitetsu sword up Momo's ass made me lol, and I love how Luffy's personality switched real quick once they were behind closed doors lmao it's a clever and funny way to incorporate Luffy's character trait of be able to switch from lighthearted to 100% deadly serious just like that

mature chopper surprising everyone lol he can be so gullible so don't blame them for being surprised that he knows how sex works haha

this was a great remix of Punk Hazard, and an awesome way to end arc with the Aika reveal...ofc now everyone knows except her and Luffy themselves lmao
EffBO94 chapter 43 . 4/26
lmao at Law carrying around a piece paper with his number on it, he always does plan ahead in advance I guess looool
EffBO94 chapter 42 . 4/26
Luffy can be a romantic when he wants to be huh?
and oh no, pls don't tell me Tashigi's getting the hots for Law...not really a fan of that ship much but whatever it's your fic not mine lol

judging on Law's reaction, i suppose it's getting to the point where Luffy and Aika find out they're related huh, looking forward to that revelation haha
EffBO94 chapter 41 . 4/26
lmao that's an excellent point actually, Caesar Baby 5 and Buffalo would've needed to be rescued before they drowned, can't believe I never thought of that lol

and I bet it was Usopp who was the unlucky sucker who had to dive into the freezing sea and get them he always draws the short straw lmao
EffBO94 chapter 37 . 4/26
And Caesar's down! and Luffy has a new fan in Aika! I'm glad you didn't go the anime route, where Luffy's in this stupid mid-air clash with Caesar for 5 mins before his Grizzly Magnum works, which is NOT how it happened at all lol
EffBO94 chapter 20 . 4/26
what the hell are those idiots Blizzard and Jupiter doing instead of securing an escape route for their crews like they were meant to lmao
EffBO94 chapter 15 . 4/25
"SWEET ONIGIRI I THINK I'M STANDING ON HIM!"
"oh yeah, ON SECOND THOUGHT, IGNORE WHAT I JUST SAID!"

honestly Luffy and Zoro made this chapter for lmao
EffBO94 chapter 10 . 4/25
yeah I don't like Caesar either even his funny moments I'm laughing AT him not with him the stupid clown lol. Can't believe people actually want him to join the Straw Hats
btw I've come here straight from "the Fire Within", which I loved, this fic is great as well, I love the subtle changes made without making the Straw Hats act out of character, looking forward to Luffy and Aika interactions too. that's why I came here first, to see how they first met. planning to read the other arcs too, but yeah,great fic
EffBO94 chapter 9 . 4/25
lmao Luffy's reaction to almost kissing Sanji had me dead loool
iron maker2 chapter 33 . 6/26/2017
nah not crazy, more like not wanting to become that sicko that is his biological father (What he did to his wife and worse, to his daughter... yeah i can see why Sanji hates men who make woman cry, cause again his biological dad a douchebag.)
AsylusGoji91 chapter 34 . 4/20/2017
That chapter... was really gives me some tears... But I really love that moment that Mocha saved her friends from that "candy".
Guest chapter 10 . 10/11/2016
Caesar will NEVER join luffy's crew
Money D. Lars chapter 1 . 2/5/2016
Is there more lemons after first chapter?
Abigail Skywalker chapter 33 . 12/14/2015
Nice recap. However, Even if She was having an argument with Zoro I can't imagine Tashigi calling Zoro a son of a bitch as you put it. Because that would be referring to the fact that it was his mother's fault that he turned out that way. She is the sort of person who would speak up against people who speak like that, and called them sexist. You've made her act out of character.
Czar Joseph chapter 9 . 10/4/2015
Can't believe Kinemon got his legs back. Since talk about Body swap. Nami charged Sanji if he will do perversion ways to do rash.

As Fart, that was hilarious.
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