Wow...poor Elsa...being raped or sexually assaulted is terrible for anyone and to be pregnant with someone whose is a rapist. Wow...I just want to hug Elsa so badly here. And these emotions she's feeling seem very realistic and very relatable, because their is so much stigma and victim-blaming when it comes to rape. It's really sad :( I feel for Elsa and I am glad she has a supportive sister and friends that can support her through this

are you going to make a sequel to frozen two

First, I am a diehard Frozen fan. I have read all types of Frozen fanfiction despite the subject matter, even if I don't agree with it. I'm willing to read different writing styles, ideas, and character development. I prefer my Frozen fanfiction to be closest to the filmmakers depiction of the characters and plot. With Frozen, I'm looking for futher character and plot development for the sake of these beloved characters.

Second, I very apprehensivily decided to read this 'story' despite its heinous plot description. What a mistske on my part. This was one trainwreck of a story, if you could even call it that. I winced through it all hoping that it would get better in some way but it didn't. It was just awful. Gagging the 'prettier' of the sisters, as you remark in your A/N, is clearly VERY warped. It's quite apparent that you have some sick sadistic crush on Elsa as do many of your readers who claim to love this story, regardless of writer's block or not. You should have just stopped. Elsa's dress is not provocative, as Hans suggests. It's a modern style 2013 dress, definitely not a mid-1800s style, but not warranting a sexual assault either way. Then you have Hans assault Anna, too!?. Ugh. Obviously, this story was rushed and not fleshed out. It was definitely very warped. It was a slap in my face as a Frozen fan and as a woman.

Third, I have not read any of your other fanfiction, so I don't know if you have improved or not with your writing skills. I would hope that you have improved. Other Frozen fanfiction authors have actually gone back and rewrote some of their works. Despite, the really harsh subject matter, this work could be greatly improved upon if more time was spent on it and the plot was better fleshed out. I'm not a writer. I wouldn't even begin to attempt to write any fanfiction. But I do love this film dearly and its characters. Thus, I'm a fanfiction reader. If I think my Frozen fanfiction story is a bloody crapshoot, I'm going to call you out on that. This particular work was awful. I can't lie. It really made me cringe.

Wow, I loved this so much! Why does the new Frozen 2 trailer motivate me to read Frozen fanfics? Lol

woww I love it! Thanks for spending your time to write this! I have no idea when you last updated, I just discovered frozen fanfiction and I'm just reading people's stories randomly but I love yours!

Could you please write an extra chapter explaining how Hans found out about Melantha and the fact she's his daughter? You don't have to; I just thought it would be interesting.

I like it

I love how Olaf says something like “Isn’t this so exciting?” and “Oh no! She’s bleeding” it’s funny because that goes with giving birth

I like when Kristoff did Stefan’s voice saying SNOWMAN

love this is pretty nice

I know the baby is an illegitimate child but it just feels so wrong and heartbreaking when Elsa calls her a bastard ,for several times even. You will surely love her Elsa, in fact I think she already loves her little daughter but the rape has traumatized her too much and she can't realize her feelings clearly.

I would love to see a sequel, but I understand if that's not going to happen. Thanks for sharing this amazing story with all of us.

Wowwwwwwwww!
You know are a great writer and mathilda is nothing like Hans
Great skills you got there

Can we see a sequel ? Maybe in Adam's POV or when Mellie is an adult?

Truly a great story.