| Reviews for Beware The Older Brother |
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   Leafintel chapter 1 . 2/16/2019 Lmao fuck I wanted to see Sabo, Law and Luffy talking though |
| Megan Schoutless chapter 1 . 9/5/2018 just love the overprotective Ace! xD |
| kayeooon chapter 1 . 6/29/2018 hahahaha that was hilarious! |
| Sakihinata chapter 1 . 5/16/2018 Poor Law...and Sabo seemed the reasonable one too ;) |
| Killua Lawliet chapter 1 . 4/5/2018 Great it's just like Law: We're free!*Sabo appears*FUCK I HATE YOUR FAMILY! I was half expecting it to be Dadan or Garp that would have been funny as well but this one works! |
| ElfiieSu chapter 1 . 12/19/2017 Hilarious ! Love it ! |
| guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2017 haha! brocon ace! hilarious! loved the ending with sabo! |
| Dan0002 chapter 1 . 10/9/2016 Can we have a chapter with all of them just having a family dinner. Like Dragon and Grap are there too. Like Dragon just quick trying to be polite and Grap just asking embrassing question like "so do you two use protection?" "I want grandkids!" Sabo just embarrassed for Luffy so he tries to change the subject a lot. Ace is just sitting next to Luffy trying hard to hold himself back from punching both Grap and Law in the face. I can only imagine Law being there like 'This is for Luffy' repeating that over and over in his head. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2016 this is genuinely the funniest shit Ive read in a long time I love the fuck outta aces brother complex and oh my god thatch killed me with thT shit and then THERES marco. I love them. best fucking characters man. |
| JadeFlicker chapter 1 . 5/26/2016 Law was expecting the answer to be "ex-boyfriend" or something along those lines. The actual answer was much, much worse. 8D |
| ninjakittyx3 chapter 1 . 4/13/2016 omg that was so cute and funny! i love overprotective ace and i wasnt expecting sabo at all! poor law xD awesome job ! :D |
| sanjiism chapter 1 . 3/24/2016 I got a good laugh out of this ace is so nosy and annoying and protectiveness that I can't help but like him more and more. this fic is sooooo good. poor marco though, always being dragged along with ace's shenanigans. I thought there'll be a bit of marcoace but this best friend's moments are good for my heart too. and law omg law, poor guy. it won't be long before he really breaks down because of cocblockers lmao. and I love sabo's cameo here omg. didn't expect it. thank you for writing this! |
| Kipen chapter 1 . 2/24/2016 I don't even ship LawLu/LuLaw and I officially love this story. I just love overprotective Ace.（） |
| OctaveTea chapter 1 . 2/23/2016 Can't get enough of overprotective Ace! You absolutely nailed Marco's and Thatch's character, thanks for such a great read! |
| lilmymyshem chapter 1 . 2/5/2016 Sabo doesn't understand the situation at all. I bet Ace knew that was going to happen or at least have Luffy monitored. |
