Impressive. Excelent. Amazing use of the language, and the essence of the characters is impeccable.

Thank you, indeed. This piece has touched me.

Hi there, I was checking my user stats and I decided to look through some of the authors that had put me on their favorites list, and so as I was scrolling down I noticed your name. I knew you looked familiar to me so I decided to check out your profile. And then it dawned on me that I had read this story two years ago...back when I had no grasp of writing o_O; Which got me to wondering, 'Why did this brilliant writer put me on her favorites list?'

Anyways, I was checking through the reviews to see if there were any chapters that I missed, and couldn't help but gag at my reviews. They were just so full of spelling errors that I wanted to fling myself out of a hotel window. And most of the errors I made were errors I bitch at people about today. But yes, I've gained a few IQ points so you won't be getting a shitty review from me today.

If you still don't remember me I'm the author that wrote that crappy Mummy story, "A New Reign of Terror" and "Terror Lives On." You might remember me as Jessie C or Imhoteps Lover. Yes, those stories are dead now. I have removed a lot of my stories in order to make a new start. I guess you can say I sort of abandoned The Mummy. I have now found new fandoms to prowl XD

Ok, enough of that, it's time to review! I noticed I didn't leave a review for this story so I thought I'd change that! This chapter was outstandingly beautiful with so much detail and emotion. I'm *still* not this good, even after two years of hard work. You've still got it, hon!

Well, if you'd like to do some catching up or something you can always chat with me on AIM. My screen name is Chibi Dragon18. Or you could PM me. Whatever you like :)

See ya!

~Dracori

its great...

What happends to Ardeth next? What of the woman?

Please keep the never ending snippet go on and on and on...

MM, as always great work, this is the first time I have read the story, is there going to be more of Frank and Jade?

I could feel the pain of Ardeth letting the one he loves go to did an admirable job.

Hey!

I love these short stories! Gees loses his love to Kedar? How sad for Ardeth. Is he ever happy in a story? :-( I love all your stories even the short ones! I look forward to more Thicker as well as maybe the end to Heros? and I believe there is a seq in the works for Somewhere? I am still hoping Sharif is ok! As I have said in the past as long as you write um, I will read and review! :-)

Delicious! You did an admirable job living up to the challenge as listed. Ardeth is well-captured by your prose. And the dialogue is very good. Thank you so much!

Oh, my goodness, you put this up here. Dynamite.

I wanted to reach out and comfort Ardeth. His emotions came across so well. A very emotional piece and beautifully written.

Short, but sweet. :-) An excellent job of fitting all the requirements into an entertaining snippit.

ur...*reviving slowly*...eh?
w-where am i? i was just having the most wonderful dream, about Ardeth snogging me somewhere outside on a patio...
oh wait a minute! that was your story wasnt it? *smacks self on head* you see how confusing it all is when its that detailed you think youre actually there? damn, reality crashes back in with an unwelcome thud.
im sad now, coz i thought for a minute Ardeth Bay was giving me the old tonsil exam...alas! alack the day twas nought but a spectre of the mind's eye (your mind's eye to be exact)
*pout*
i love these snippets! they're so dense and descriptive that you dont need to know the whys and wherefores, coz you just get so lost in the moment... *sigh*
i want another one...i need it! just another shot, thats all...c'mon, score me a hit! *shivers in withdrawal* anything! a synthetic Ardeth substitute, i dont care! just give it to m-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e!
*whispers* please dont tell my mum about this...

With one last shuddering breath, Ardeth Bay died.
I never thought one sentence could drive so much pain and despair into my soul... *sobs quietly* i now know the meaning of grief...i dont think my life will ever be the same again...
this sounds like a good story! scotland and witches and books that you shouldnt read but you just cant help yourself, and castles and a bit with a dog! i hope you get this posted soon!
oh, and if you could just see your way to resurrecting Ardeth... IF ITS NOT TOO MUCH TROUBLE! (yes, thank you Jonathan)
then send him round to my house for a bit of rest and recuperation (well, not rest as such...*wink wink*)
more snippets!

This was beautiful, like the one about the Medjai Wife.

It touched my heart.

As I sit here trying to put out the flames that just erupted from my computer. I breath a sigh of relief that I read this smoldering chapter from hone and NOT the office!

WOW!

Ah.

Doesn't have your usual flair MM!

Not really impressed by this one. Still I did like Solman's honest answers