| Reviews for Betrayal |
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   Vilian chapter 1 . 6/3/2017 Ouch. Powerful. |
| Tiser chapter 1 . 2/12/2013 love this! |
| Nyxia chapter 1 . 1/31/2011 It was short but poweful! I really love the last sentence! :) Well done and i'm gonna read your others stories! :) ~Nyxia |
| Sailor Walnut chapter 1 . 7/9/2000 This was a very cool, passionate little story thing. The words were really powerful and eloquent. I liked it. |
| alphabet chapter 1 . 4/11/2000 Whoa...um...intense. But a very nice, very descriptive story! |
| celia chapter 1 . 4/11/2000 it was pretty cool. |
