You should do a female Kira with heero yuy from Gundam wing

great chapter and update in 2017?

Sweet chapter

good

Good start

o.o Holy hera im loving this story...I mean, the defection by Mu ,the changes to how much Kira knows about mogenrate,and so on...the difference of how the colony fell,and flay ending up on the zaft ship and being a coordinator...so many changes...AND IT WORKS.

Far better than Seeds generic starting plot. The KiraCagalli twin thing was an asspull by the writer probally suggested by their spouse since its not really ever touched again, and so was the ultimate coordinator part since it never is given Kira had been the only SEED user,i woulda believed no,even cagalli,a natural,and Lacus,a non pilot, got it! Whos next? Chief Murdock?!

The best thing in Seed was probally the reveals of Rau Le Crueset later man we love to hate.(and oh god those reused battle clips...New animation technology,and they did THAT...it couldve been SO much more...they need to remake the series animations from the ground up...kinda like when they redid Full Metal Alchemist(the art style improved well...less gloomy,more wow.)

You are taking this story in interesting direction. I'll love to read more of it.

Interesting start of a promising story!

If this is support to be a crossover story with Amuro shouldn't Amuro be in this chapter

I found this chapter quite pointless and romances are working way to fast for this is have any realism in it that Gundam stories should have.

Romances occur way too fast in this story , that's really, really bad.

Please focus on life of a mercenary
Kagari cannot walk even on no gravity? Damn ryu... You outdid yourself...
Meh? MEH.? Kira just found out she has a sister and a experiment subject and just MEH? Talk about badass...
So... Killing intent and planking intent are different...
Nat and ryu... I never thought ryu was the older woman type...
And Nat are bi? Now that's a surprise... So... Friends with benefit?
Coordinator with allergic? I thought coordinator are engineered to have almost no sickness?
Wait... Yzak part just end with a deep kiss? No lemon? This is not you... Dragonknightryu would have put in a lemon...
Anyway, joke aside, please update life of a mercenary... Please... Your update frequency also drop...

Well, it won't be your story without lemon... But I think Amuro and Kira could hold on until late later...

So is the Nu Gundam gonna be refitted with leftover extra weapons for the Duel, Buster, Aegis, and Blitz? It would be nice to see the Strike mix-&-match weapons from its various Striker Packs instead of strictly adhering to only weapons provided by a single Striker Pack

Nice update but I much prefer life of a mercenary. And please update that one faster.
This chapter is...nice... Predictable...
Wait... How could Amuro nu gundam fit into archangel? It was too big for archangel hanger bay that was design to fit g weapon and nu gundam are much taller than g weapon...
So... Kira and his brother has a suit... Any info about them? Beside exodus?

You do know that Amuro Ray is 29 in Char's Counterattack right so the pairing with Kira is kinda...I mean I have no problem with the pairing but its still kinda weird lol.

Anyways how does the Nu-Gundam have a beam saber if he lost all his weapons to Char, If you did what Amuro did in the movie you could of made it so that he stole the saber from a ZAFT MS.

And what Happened to Char, will he be coming in later in the story or something.

Other then that the story is good but please fix these few mistakes and I look forward to the next chapter.