Starting to reread this fic for what seems like the 10th time... it’s just so good!
It’s the best fic I’ve ever come across and that’s saying a lot from me! . I wish more people wrote like this and I wish I could find more OC centric fics that follow Roy’s teams side of the story... anyways, I love this fic and now I get back to my reread! :D

Oh I love that, it's awesome, beautiful, gah I want to talk forever about how goddamn awesome that demonstration was!

Just imagining being one of the people in that room, watching her draw what seems like a small transmutation circle on her hand before nonchalantly whistling.

The first tone, glass smashes. Second, the lights go out. On the third, a hand presses down on your shoulder. And finally, her last whistle dismantles the guns which the guards beside her held fell apart.

And that isn't even one of her Aces? Terrifying.

I have read this chapter many times and it never fails to make me cry.

This was the second fanfiction I ever read, bored to tears at a New Years party full of people I didn't know all too well, I picked it up when only around 30 chapters had been posted, and I haven't stopped since. This was the story that really got me into fanfiction, and I can't thank you enough for that. I just wanted you to know that even after all these years, I still go back to this story when I need a pick-me-up and I really, really love diving into Stephanie's adventures, picking out new or forgotten details that never fail to make me smile. Thank you so much for this wonderful story!

This is my fifth time rereading this story and I still love it! Good work!

does cool alchemy stuff
"Your control here was always an illusion"

gets fucking rekt two chapters later
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Forgot I had read this already and a portion of the sequel and reread all of it up to where I was in one night. Awesome stuff, keep up the good work! I’ll probably end up leaving a similar review once I catch up to where it is currently. I’m currently dying of sleep deprivation because I got sucked in and now I’m rambling and now uh wait... I forgot what I was saying, anyways, great work on this amazing story.

Is there something I’m missing here, why are they banging their heads against walls here?
Something from the main storyline?

Btw, what happened to the AO3 sequel?

I'm not sure if it's just me, but I think there are some perspective change issues in this chapter. I can't tell who was talking in the phone booth scene.

How did you come up with the phone codes? I want to do stuff like this with my friends, so we would like some tips because these are AMAZING!

Hey, I've read this story through a few times and I have to say I really love it. There are only a few issues that I found with it, one sometimes it was hard to tell what she was talking about or what date the chapter was taking place during and the memory thing while interesting was completely unrealistic.
Other than that was that you used far too modern technology/fashion in the world in-home television wasn't invented until 1927 and not common until shortly after 1930.

I f-ing love this story, This is an amazing, well written fan fiction, And I just love the humour

Exactly as I remember it, fucking beautiful

FOUND THE COOL DEAL THING :D