Looks like I'll be your 100th review for this story, so I hope this will encourage you to update soon, I'm intrigued to learn more about elsa's past, this story is unusual, and although I skip over the smut, I did enjoy the rest, especially Anna training her men. I hope your urge to write comes back, you are talented.

I miss this story...hope u could update ..I'd really appreciate that ..

I just read the work you have posted. I like it. There is just enough intrigue that I want to know what comes next but am not annoyed at vague hints. Keep up the good work. Also, how is Anna's letter getting to Arendelle? Does Elsa have messenger golems or is Kristoff supposed to just walk up to the royal palace?

:)

uh ... I want more ... :(

Great job ending on a cliffhanger. Let's pick this story back up and start strong. Just one page a day and you'll be done in no time.
-From myself

No new chapter. I miss this story.

Oh you would leave me at cliffhanger when I'm completely tense, toes curling from anticipation :) I'm utterly enticed!

Great chapter! Confused about Elsa though. If her birth father was an elemental then her mother was the queen? But the queen didn't know about it? Why did the king know? Did I interpret something wrong?
PLEASE UPDATE

I wonder what was happening there at the end with the golems. Maybe Elsa's jealousy acting out subconsciously? Hopefully Anna's okay!

And wow...didn't realize Kristoff was in on the immortality thing too haha. Glad he's a good guy though, helping Elsa. I wonder how he feels about her killing all those people though.

Hopefully Elsa nurse Anna back to health soon so it shows she does have compassion and feelings for her. Glad go see Elsa having a tinge of jealousy with kristoff taking care of Anna.

I wonder how elsa feels knowing all the girls before could've fallen in love with her. That's definitely a punch to the gut. And I wonder what her relationship with Kristoff is...I mean, he can't hate her if he's helping her. Or maybe it's part of some deal.

Either way, looking forward to how elsa deals with Anna given the new...conditions haha

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Love the story, keep it up!

i really really enjoy reading this I just love it