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OMG I love this please continue!

Something is definitely wrong with this fic cause it's making me wait the next chapter like I'd be waiting (in pain) a real One piece chapter on hiatus.. Wait.. Could that be.. because this fic is so GOOD? :D So yeah, can't wait for the next one!

oh my oh my
is it time for Corazon to... you know, say good bye...
and where is Law? will he witness the death of...

alright, I will wait for the next chapter, :3

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dont tell me next chapter Corazon will...?
anyway, i love this chapter so much! XD

This story is taking an interesting turn. I can't wait to see what's next!

This new chapter was awesome! I'm glad you're not just repeating how the original story goes but simply using it as a source for your own story, it's much more interesting that way. It was nice to see Corazon acting so father-like, and him forgetting the cigarettes on the ship was funny as well. But how dare you leave such a cliffhanger, now I can't wait the next part!

wait a second- i haven't give any reviews on the prev chapter too?
well i will just put it here then.
It's quite amazing of you to quickly make a change for corazon into his acctual self.. that's briliant honestly XD
why Law is so cold to cora? omg I hope he's not that despressed ;3;
I really love their fluff- but thinking about he definitely will die in later chapters- AAAAAA MY POOR HEART CAN'T HANDLE IT TWICE-!
I hope to see more from you though! /;w;/

love this chapter so much!
if Mingo really warned Corazon like this before the incident in comic happened...*scramming insanity*

waiting for the next chap...as well as the bothers fiction that you mentionplaning to *grinning*

Yay, new chapter! This is my favorite OP fic by far, it's so cute and heartwarming, and you do amazing job〜〜〜! I love how you try to make this more canon even though I have no complaints of the pre-flashback parts either. I just love your versions of Law, Doffy and Cora3 Can't wait the next one, but if you won't make it before Christmas, merry Christmas to you!

damn! you didn't update in a while and now you give us this heart breaking moments! oh my! I REALLY LOVE IT! XD
Doffy's affection, oh God! I love it how he seems to get jealous because Cora get near Law,
and how Law describe the Donquixotte brother, and his sickness, it's incredible and angsty in the same time, :")

oh my oh my, I don't know why you late update this one, but when I know the new chapter is coming, I am exteremly happy! thank you very much for the new chapter, hope you can update soon,
good luck, :3

Belle histoire!

I did not expect to see your story take a turn to adapt the canon storyline about Law's past, but I'd still like to see how they develop in your world, since it seems like Oda will take his time to really get to the point of Corazon.

Anyway, I like the adjustments you've made in Law's past to adapt it to the story narration. The only complaints I have is that Corazon's POV sounds a bit weird for him sometimes - in some parts he sounds like Law, especially his reactions to Doffy's creepiness.

I will be looking forward to the new chapter!

owah, I am so sad, the feels! TTTT
Is it true about Law sickness? Is that canon or your plot? I didn't read the online manga, so I didn't go that far with the current chapter, and this fict make my heart so broken, but well, I love angst after all, so this is the best

Ay, Doffy/Cora! so cute, I like them too, although DofLaw still be my best OTP, but sometimes twincest is so hot, esp when they have identical face

okay, keep writing Author-san

PLOT TWISTTT- O[]O
omfg you're really creative to slip those facts and headcanons in here!
now the story is become TOTAL BADASS!
I LOVE IIITT!

Cora- I love how he care about doffy's feeling like that awww ;;;;w;;;;
and of course to law too... HE'S LIKE THEIR BIG BRO IM CRYING
I LOVE CORAA! I OFFICIALLY LOVE HIM AS MUCH AS I DO WITH LAW N DOFFY! THX TO U!

wow so Law rly listened to all they said the whole timee? it's sound rly cool *sugar eyes*

and the way you slip those jokes... it doesn't ruin the angst feel-
you're rly my fav writter nao.. KEEP WRITTING! X)))))