| Reviews for No line on the horizon |
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scars from the sun chapter 1 . 5/22 Magnifique |
Yuki Suou chapter 1 . 5/19/2019 definitely his heaven. |
Anaelyssa chapter 1 . 6/4/2018 Nice and fairly cute. |
soverylazy11 chapter 1 . 11/2/2016 if jiraiya has amnesia, then why did orochimaru test him on a memory test? |
Jaricchi chapter 1 . 10/26/2016 This is lovely. Also: "Except that I think you're confusing just who needs to wear the condom here." Was the perfect line ever. Thank you for sharing! |
bartlettpear chapter 1 . 8/18/2016 This was a nice break from all the pain and suffering, thank you for writing :-) Did you ever write snippets focusing on the other characters from this universe? |
Bluejay Blaze chapter 1 . 4/21/2016 And Jiraiya has found shinobi heaven... |
Donni chapter 1 . 2/25/2016 Ahhh, you make my heart happy and put a smile on my face |
Kris Senju chapter 1 . 1/31/2016 wow this is crazy. please tell me theres a sequel. |
jj chapter 1 . 1/30/2016 im so glad i found this again i love reading it |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/9/2016 Wait, wait, wait, was it just implied that a drunk Jiraiya screwed Orochi? Omg I love it lol |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/9/2016 I think it's sad that his timeline COULD have had such peace but instead had shit hitting the fans 24/7 |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2015 Really wanna see a sequel to this, and what happened to Jiraiya. |
jj chapter 1 . 7/28/2015 love it that was great especally the part with orochimaru and tsunades greetings lol nice |
Noradin chapter 1 . 6/12/2015 So it is kind of a personalised heaven for Jiraiya :) |