I love the hilarious relationship between pan and trunks...

That was a cute story...I suppose you could use the ending as like a real ending, but it sorta lacks closure. But, it was a really good read and I enjoyed it!

The ending was gOod...but please update

Pleasee tel me tats not the ending

This story, for being your first T/P fic is quite astonishing. I can't believe you actually think you're not a good writer you're great! You should be proud of what you've completed. I have to admit I agree with you in the aspect of losing interest in DBZ - The fact that so many of my favourite writers had stopped, had led me to begin to lose my own interest. I also still look around just for a glimpse of some of the old community, but it has really faded over the years... I hope you find new inspiration or a re-kindling of old, but whatever path you take just know that you’re a great writer and don't ever give up.

hello

the storys great...i love it...lots of romance...love that ..aniwase keep up the good work and hopefully you update the next chapter soon...

Great fic

Update soon!

you should be prode of you self this story is really GOOD! REALLY I AM IMPESSED I DID NOT EXPECTED THIS STORY TO BE THIS GOOD OR EVEN GOOD !

nad ch.16 I like it you did an alsome job writting this story.

IT HAD a little action, romance, comdy and all the other good things on each ch. was really good yep that good for your first Fic. if this is your first fic. its the bom!

I loved this sentence ' Silence isnt deadly...Just mildly awkward..' dunno why but i laughed my ass off at that .. guess you have to be in my crazy head to understand it! I really think this story is great cant wait till you update again

LOVE IT LOVE IT ! what are u talking about u can't write fluff, my butt. keep up the gd work and do not put urself down like that. I love the love/hate thing so keep it up update soon!

Wow that was great. Update soon!

continue soon plz

That didn't suck, I loved it! Please put the next chapter up ASAP! Please?

Hey, wow, all of those 16 chapters were fantastic! And I got to read them all in a row! But now you haven't updated for about 8 months..? Are you going to update this or have you abandoned it.. ( Well I hope that you do update! Bye!

-ChRiSTiZ :*)

you should keep writing you would also keep some fans!

Hey! Sorry, the chapter didn't suck, although, I definetly wouldn't mind if you updated soon. I've been waiting for almost 4 months! That's how good your story is. Anyways, I've had time to read up to this point about 15 million times, so please update soon!