Can’t wait to see what happens next!

Can't wait to for the next episode!

Really excited for upcoming chapters.

I’ve spent the better part of a week reading these stories and I love how you’ve brought Arabella into this vast universe and make it feel organic. It’s nice to get more backstory on her family, and I’m glad she chose to go back. I can’t wait to see your next update, I love this story so much and I’m kind of sad I caught up to the present. Please update soon!

I hope you update soon!

Go Kassandra!

This was such a deep chapter! I like that you added all of her family so she can see what they were like. She had a tough choice because she was tired of all the pain but we can’t really become a better version of ourselves without the struggles. It either breaks us or makes us better. Right now it’s such an uphill battle because of the War so I can see Arabella’s struggle to finally rest or finally end the war and being happy with Harry. Again, very meaningful and deep chapter.
I also think that with Dobby’s death Harry finally had a realization of being a warrior (finally growing up) instead of just being young wizards on a mission. I feel like the last of Harry’s childhood ended with Dobby’s death. Dobby was a reminder of his time at Hogwarts, his wonder and discovery of magic. Dobby death was certainly symbolic in my opinion.

Nice limbo scene. I don't know if the limbo only works if the person is nearly dead or not, but I'm glad that this chapter got to this perfect scene. Now, I wait and see what happens next. Good work!

Yikes wonder how Harry will react please keep going’s so so good

Finally caught up pleas up date soon

hey! still loving this story! just out of curiosity (since i know this is a rewrite) are you still pulling from your original writing or are you starting from scratch each chapter. i never read the original so i don’t know how much has changed but i seems like a lot

Hope you update soon!

Remus needs to come in the next chapter.
I love Arabella and Remus relationship. I love stories where Remus gets a god daughter (as long if the character is good).
I suggest you read Devyn Murphy series. Its really od.

Oh man sweet Arabella! Dx I like the small part with Tonks and Remus too, a slight reprieve from the bad things happening. Aaaaah Dobby that part always got me sad and teary eyed! Dx
Arabella has gone through so much but now that she’s with her friends again they’ll take care of her while she heals.

Oh my gosh! I'm torn between anticipation and heartbreak! Excellent work, and I can't wait for the next installment!

Great chap. I can honestly say that I like this story, but I’d prefer to see Harry be more competent compared to canon. For example, using more powerful magicks than stunners or disarming spells. Stuff like that. Other than that, great story and I can’t wait for the next chap.