This is a bit more T-rated than what I normally read or write, but I found that it was quite interesting to read.

When I saw that you were going to write Zacharias/Pansy, I wasn't sure what direction you'd go for, and I think you pulled it off really well. I really liked the one-line third paragraph - it adds a nice link in between Hating Pansy!Zacharias and Fancying Pansy!Zacharias.

My favourite line in the whole thing was probably "She was cinnamon; savory through the day, but by night she became as sweet as the day was long."

Your spelling and grammar looks solid.