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guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2014 Name: Ryan Nickname:the devil child Age:16 Gender:male Sexuality:straight Skin tone:tan Everyday clothing:a black shirt faded jeans and sandals Formal: a black suit Swimwear: red trunks Hair color:blonde Hairstyle:messy but adorable Accessories:shark tooth necklace Other features: dark brown eyes Personality: evil and manipulative play boy Likes: stealing and angering people and music and girls Dislikes: ugly girls smart people and the color pink Bio: Ryan has been tormenting people since he could walk. He is very popular. He lives in Florida Relationship: yes Friendship: jokes and popular people Enimies: people who figure him out Talents: singing, manipulating, drawing Fears: the dark, smart people Faults: very stupid. Acts and Chris: aragant ,better than every one else. Acts around Chef:same Acts around Blainley: same flirty Acts around tejae: same Favorite band: paramour Favorite song: ain't it fun by paramour Favorite singer: Amy Lee Favorite actor: Adam hicks Audition tape: hey Chris. Ryan here. If you want your next winter pick me |
guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2014 Name: Thalia Nickname: n/a Age:15 Gender: female Sexuality: bisexual Skin tone: pale Everyday clothing: a black leather jacket, blue paid open flannel shirt, black shirt with a random purple design on it, ripped faded jeans, black two inch buckle boots Formal wear: a dark blue form fitting dress, and black high heels Swim wear: a dark blue bikini Hair color: blonde and red Hair style: shirt in the funny long in the back. The longer part reaches her shoulders Accessories: a skull necklace, two chain bracelet, earrings all over her ear, a very button piercing, a lip pricing Other features: grey eyes. She wears dark purple lipstick, coal colored eyeliner Personality: she's nice and unless you cross her and her friends, then you may wanna run. She's a vegetarian and an animal lover she has trust issues Likes: animals, reading, electronics, music Dislikes: no it all prissy popular girls and braggers Bio: she grew up in a small town and its the younger of seven and gets straight a's and trends to hang with her 'crew' Relationship: yes I read the comments and would like for her to be paired with Dusk, of that's cool with Wolfs 1999 Friends: sweet, smart people Enimies: popular people Talents: she can skateboard and sing and dance Fears: spiders and snakes Faults: she is shy and stammers and often wakes up screaming stage fright Act around Chris: very shyly Act around Chef: same as Chris Act around Blainley: same as Chris Act around TaJea: same as Chris Favorite- Band: Evanescence Singer: Amy Lee Song: Hello by Evanescence Actor: Bridgette Mindler Audition tape: "Hello, I'm Thalia. I'd like to be in the new season to pay for singing classes. I'd be honored to be picked. Thank you," as soon as Thalia finishes, the camera turns off. |
guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2014 Name: Dante Nickname: n/a Age: 16 Gender: male Sexuality: straight Skin tone: tan Everyday clothing: faded jeans, black and green high tops, a Ghost Town band shirt Formal wear: a tuxedo and black dress shoes Swimwear: black trunks Hair: black and messy Eyes: green Accessories: a black and green hat Other feature: he has dimples Personality: he's laid back and a prankster Likes: pranking and skateboarding Dislikes: Buzz kills Bio: he pretty much has just hung out with his skater friends Relationship: sure with someone laid back Friends: every one that's not a buzz kill Enimies: Buzz kills Talents: skateboarding Fears: spending an hour alone with Heather Faults: he didn't take anything seriously Act around Chris: he'd be nice Act around Chef: he'd follow orders Act around Blainley: charmingly Act around TaJea: charmingly Favorite- Band: Ghost Town Singer: Amy Lee Song: voodoo by Ghost Town Actor: Adam Hicks Audition tape: The camera turns on to show Dante at some skate park. "I should be on the new season of Total Drama cause I'm awesome," Dante says before skating of and grinding a rail. The camera goes him around a bit before the guy carrying out falls and the image is replaced by static. |
Briar 4 chapter 2 . 6/16/2014 *Smiles excitedly and squeals* Yaaaaaaay! SO happy that Briar got picked! but..the Ice Cream Enthusiast? hmm...that certainly IS a new one! b-but don't get me wrong I really love it! I do can I cannot wait until u get all the OC's gathered up! So good luck! |
Briar 4 chapter 1 . 6/16/2014 Name:Briar Monroe Nickname:None Age:17 Gender:Female Sexuality:Strait Skin Tone:Dark skinned Everyday Clothing:Gray hoodie over a red tank top, army green skinny jeans and sparkly white high tops along with her large round glasses. Formal Wear:Strapless silk red gown that reaches her ankles and gray ballet flats. Swimwear:Army green one-piece with red trim and printed with white stars. Hair Color:Black Hair Style:Shiny and reaches her waist. Accessories:A small bronze and gold locket that she never takes off cause it's the only thing she's got left of her real family and not her adopted family. Other Features:Small nose and thin dark brown lips. Personality:Briar's a very kind and honest girl with an IQ of 100.9 so she's extremely smart and always stands strong and firm in the face of adversary. Likes:Reading and studying many, many subjects and languages in order to get into Harvard to become most successful, sweets, raspberry-chocolate flavored ice cream, 'Mr. Peabody And Sherman' which is her most fav of all time! and reading. Dislikes:Black licorice, meanies and dream crushers. Bio:In the year 1997 on September 1st Briar Monroe was born in New Orleans, Oregon and was abandoned as a toddler on the New Orleans Orphange doorstep a year later and so growing up she never really had a real family up until she was 7 years old and was adopted by a lovely fellow African-American couple named Emily Monroe and her hubby Conner Monroe. Relationship?:Yes! She wants a really cute and sweet boy who can make her laugh. Faults:Without her glasses Briar cannot see a thing and can WAY protective of her friends at times. Act around Chris:She hates him. Act around Chef:Chef sorta scares her cause she's seen him shoot from watching Total Drama and doesn't speak to him unless he asks her a question. Act around Blainely:She hates her. Act around TaJea, the new fandom representative:She'll be to TaJea if that person is nice back. Favorite Band:Owl City Singer:Indina Menzel Song:'Let It Go' from the movie Frozen. Actor/tress:(Actor):Nathan Cress. (Tress):Miranda Cosgrove. Audition Tape:*Static* *An African-American girl with long black hair and grayish-purple eyes is shown sitting on a red and green bed with gold throw pillows* *smiles* Hi ya'll! the name's Briar Monroe but please call me Briar! *giggles* and I think ya TDO people need a gal who's good with strategies and stuff then I am your girl! *laughs* err..I got nothing else...so bye! *static* |
Anonymoose chapter 1 . 6/16/2014 I'm thinking about entering! Anyway, I looked over it, you should include a bit more about looks.(Clothes and facial/head things) Unless they have like, uniforms or something. /Shrug/ Have fun/good luck! |
Dame Rivere chapter 2 . 6/16/2014 If you could wait I a bit, I'll submit an OC. |
StormyNights11 chapter 1 . 6/16/2014 Name: Tia Amber Arrow Nickname: Tigress or Stripes Age: 15-15 1/2 Gender: Female Sexuality: Straight Skin Tone: Copperish Tan Everyday Clothing: A tiger suit that fits perfectly, a what tank top and shorts under. Has a secret golden locket shaped as a heart. Formal Wear: Red-orange dress with a thin, tiger stripe pattern. Silver flats with a black bow on the top. Swimwear: Orange one piece with a tiger stripe pattern. Sometimes wears a black pair of swim goggles. Hair Color: Dark brown, almost black. Hair Style: Straight, put in a pony tail or braid on hot days or when swimming. Accesories: A golden locket shaped like a heart. (Pictures of her real parents). Not worn during swimming. Other Features: One blue eye. One green eye. Personality: Silly, funny, unlikely but mean and just pure negitive. Likes: Cats, comfort, swimming, running, climbing, jumping. Dislikes: Dogs, blood, mean people, disgusting things. Bio: Born one week early, raised as an only child. Didn't have much friend or social friends at all but got all A's and B's. When about six, her parents died in a car accident, the only thing she got from them was a golden locket before they passed. She's weeped for months when sent to Canada. Tia was adopted when she was ten, she got a brother and two loving parents. She has been the fun loving girl of her family since then. Relationship?: None, but is hoping to find somebody that loves her for who she is. Friends?: Not many.. But would like to friend people who understand her. Enemies: Lots of people at school and neighborhood, but hates people who just come up to her, say mean things, and give her a beating for no reason. Talents: Able to run on all fours and leap abnormally high. Fears: Being hurt, being near angry animals, drowning, and.. car wrecks. Faults: ADHD, bad case of depression from her parents dying, schizophrenia from depression. Act around Chris: Acts calmly, but angrily if he is a total jerk. Act around Chef: Doesn't really act badly or good around him. Act around Blainely: Doesn't mind her, unless she says something that makes Tia want to rip her limb from limb. Act around TaJea, the new fandom representative: Acts normally. Favorite Band: 5SOS (5 Seconds of Summer) Singer: Ke$ha (What? She has good music...) Song: This is Gospel (By: Panic! at the disco :D) Actor/tress: Miranda Cosgrove (I like ICarly, ok?!) Audition tape: (Sorry, too lazy x3x) |
CyanoticNightmare chapter 2 . 6/16/2014 Thank you accepting Alexandria and Nathan! |
ScorpioTheConqueror chapter 1 . 6/16/2014 Name: Viola Abraham Nickname (s): Violin, Violla Personality (Remember, 5 lines or over): She can seem cold and snobby when she first talks to you, however once you get to know her she is kind hearted even though she gives off a terrible first impression. She knows Tae Kwon Doe so getting in a fight with her might be dangerous. She is TERRIBLE at small talk and always ends up embarassing herself. She has a massive soft spot for animals of all kinds especially dogs. She is rich but isn't terribly snobby however, she hates it when people swear and always uses very elegant words rather than swear words for example 'You ludicrous fool!' Instead of 'You a** hole!'. Viola HATES perverts and wont let them close to her. Viola hates parties. Viola also plays the Violin, and is impressively good at it, she also loves winning, she is very religious and is a christian. She is incredible at parkour and even has a YouTube channel on it. She is a scorpio (Born 11th of November) and is VERY VERY determined. Now for her flaws: She SUCKS at cooking even though she thinks she is really good at it, she is TERRIBLE at small talk, She can overreact and can lie to people without even knowing, and is very sensitive to perverts and swear words. She also hates falling in love and that can ruin her. She also has OCD, and she gets jealous VERY VERY easily about something small. History (Remember, 5 lines or over): Viola grew up in a wealthy french family but with not super loving parents, she was homeschooled for a year but her parents decided it wasn't 'elegant' and forced her into school, which she hated every bit of. She was one of the only people in her school who wasn't swearing and doing dirty things all the time, in fact she was a little bit of a teachers pet. She did finally make a couple of friends though, one of them was a boy but her over protective parents decided not to let her hang out with him. Viola now only had one friend, but they were a good friend. Viola and her friend both graduated to the same college which Viola actually enjoyed despite School and High School. While in college Viola met more people including boys. Viola got a boyfriend who she THOUGHT (we'll get to that later) was very loving. Viola was forced into climbing lessons by one of her friends and she turned out to love it, which started her love in parkour. She even started a YouTube channel on it. Her life was going great until her 'loving' boyfriend cheated on her with her friend, Viola was furious with both of them. She broke up with her boyfriend and never ever talked to her friend anymore. It took her a long time to get over it but her parents never really bothered to ask her why she was so upset. When she had finally gotten over it she started taking Tae Kwon Doe classes. When she became 18 she saw the advert for Total Drama BreakThrough and that is when she signed up, she was diagnosed with OCD at 13. Gender: Female Age (16-18): 18 Stereotype: The Rich Animal Hugger Sexuality: Pansexual Ethnicity: French Normal Clothing (Please be as detailed as you want, the more you write the more likely you are to get in): Her trademark orange sunglasses, a platinum cross necklace, Camp jacket, Black tank top underneath, Blue bra Swimwear: Red two-piece Sleepwear: Black lingerie Formal: Blue dress Jewelry: Pure platinum cross necklace Accessories: Orange Sunglasses Tattoos: One of the sun on her back Body Type: Fit but not overly fit, Double D cup, plenty of curves Height: 6'2 (Very Tall) Weight: 100 lbs Eye Shape: Small and sly Eye Color: Light Brown What Kind Of Smile: Sly, elegant and sexy Hair Color: Very Light Brown Hair Style: Beautiful, wavy and long. fringe covering her left eye Skin Color: Tanned Do They Drink Alcohol: Nope Likes(It's okay to list on things like this.): Martial Arts, China, Fitness, Salad, Money, Being elegant, Her sexy way of walking, her sexy french accent, Music, Winning, Cooking Dislikes: People who swear, Video Games, Films, Losing, Crying, Perverts, Cheaters Would They Make The Alliance Or Join It?: Make it. Aliance Name If They Made It: The Threatening Competitors What Are They Good At?: Gymnastics, Running, Being sexy, Being elegant, Remembering things, Being determined, Words What Are They Bad At?: Being cool, Holding in her emotions, Ignoring things, Gets offended easily, cooking, can lie to people without knowing, overreacting Reaction To Runner Up: Sniffle, but be happy for the winner Reaction To Winning: Squeal, hug the suitcase then scream How Far Do They Think They Will Go?: Before she joins, she thinks she can win but when it's a few eliminations in she thinks she'll get 6th-9th. How Far Do You Think They'll Go?: I'm not saying this to brag, but EVERY SINGLE SYOC I'VE BEEN IN'S CREATOR HAS FAVOURITED VIOLA, NOT EVEN KIDDING. I'm going to say final 6 at least, maybe. Theme Song: Funeral Suits - All Those Friendly People Relationship?: Yeah, with a guy like her. She wouldn't get charmed by a Alejandro-ish guy though. |
BlueIce RedFire chapter 1 . 6/16/2014 Name: Eleanor Gray Nickname: N/a Age: 16 Gender: female Sexuality: straight Skin Tone: slight faded tan Everyday Clothing: A light blue sleeveless top and a light grey netball skirt Formal Wear: A midnight blue dress and sparkling white heels, her hair is flowing with waves Swimwear: A crimson two piece, hair in a high bun Hair Color: brunette with a streak of hair faintly lighter than the rest Hair Style: A ponytail held by a red ribbon Accesories: A violet bow in her hair Other Features: multiple scars on her left wrist Personality: Eleanor is a very quirky and bipolar kind of person. She can be very happy and charming one minute and then very angry and preserved the next. The quirky thing is, her kindness always shows, even when angry. She loves being around others and shows off her perfect smile. The one thing that Eleanor doesn't see is that she can get very depressed and loose self esteem. Likes: When people be happy, mammals, flowers, sleeping, eating Dislikes: when people are sad, insects, weeds, knifes, sluts and whores Bio: Eleanor has actually had a pretty bad life. She was constantly bullied since she was very high in academic process. Eventually, she lost almost all of her self esteem and began trying to commit suicide. For three months, she'd been trying and had no luck until, when she sliced her wrist. Eventually, her parents found her and rushed her to the hospital where she regained conscious. She told her parents everything, from bullying to the suicide attempts. She began going to a therapist who helped Eleanor return to her happier self. However, the occasional bully will already have a major impact already and she might return to the knife but, since the incident, not a lot have confronted her. Relationship?: Yes, someone who is brave enough to protect her and make sure she is always happy. (Although, if you could, you might have him cheat on her, so she can try commit please) Friends?: her friends will be naturally everyone Enemies: Bullies and delinquents (although maybe you could have one fall for her) Talents: She is very skilled with karate, she has a naturally high falsetto and she is very intelligent Fears: You'd think bullies, but she actually fears death (ironic much :P) Likes: O_O do you already have this? Dislikes: Faults: Can you explain them to me please? Act around Chris: Very cheerful but, hiding the impact of his sadism Act around Chef: Kind and caring, but hides the insults he gives her Act around Blainely: She doesn't like people like her Act around TaJea, the new fandom representative: Doesn't know them as much, she'd hopefully come around in making friends Favorite Band: Arctic Monkeys Singer: Beyoncé Song: Ironically, Happy by Pharell Williams Actor/tress: Emma Watson Audition Tape (optional, but would be liked). : A young girl is seen frowning at the camera. She bites her lower lip and pulls her sleeve up to reveal the scars. "You know, three years ago, I would've concealed these but, i want people to know that I am proud about who I am now. Not the depressed witch who wants to murder herself but the teen that is happy about who they are!" She announces proudly before breaking into laughter. "Although, it's hard to get friends like this! Anyways, please pick me so I can make friends and show off to the world that Evelyn Gray is gone!" She smiles. "Evelyn was my, well, alternative name. But I am Eleanor! And I will win total drama! Thanks again for your time!" She giggles and blows a kiss. PS: I didn't know whether to send it here or via PM so i did both |
wolfs1999 chapter 2 . 6/16/2014 1: you work fast(that's not necessarily a bad thing) 2: thanks for accepting Dusk! |
i'm awesome at singing chapter 1 . 6/16/2014 Name: Fire Rose Nickname: Demon Girl/ stan's daughter/ (by her sister) life saver Age: 17 Gender: Female Sexuality?: Bio Skin Tone: Pale. Everyday Clothing: A black Hoodie that has in Red words 'I am crazy, You have been warned'. And Blood red jeans. Formal clothing: A red dress that goes down to her mid leg, with black high heels. Swimming Suit: Two piece, That is Purple with red Polka dots Hair color: Black Hair style: wavy Accessories: A eyepatch over her right eye, and a lip piercing Other Features: A c cup Personality: Fire is very bipolar. But when she gets to know someone she's nice and kind. likes: Music, Music, Axes, death, blood, gore Dislikes: when her plans backfire on her, Flowers Bio: Fire grew up a horrible childhood, She would rather not talk about it Relationship: Single Friends: Gwen, Duncan, Trent, Deshawna, Owen Enemies: Heather, Joe, Izzy, Harold, Cody Talents: singing, Making peoples life a living nightmare Fears: having Heater beat her, That no one will like her Likes, Dislikes: You have that twice) Faults: sitting still, Falling for people who she can't have Act around Chris: Cruel, Deceiving (which backfires making Chris like her) Act around Chef: nice, kind Act around Blaineley: pretty like another her Act around TaJea, the new fandom Representative: the same as she act around Chef Favorite band: Three Days Grace Favorite singer: Ed Sheeran Favorite song: Broken Glass by Three Days Grace Favorite Actor/tress: none Audition Tape: "hey..um..I'm Fire.." "Fire! There's a spider!" A very girly voice screams. Fire brings the Camera and a Axe with her. Fire set the Camera down and smashed the Spider in two. "Liz, be more careful kay?" "Thank you Life saver!" "Yea, yea, yea, Whatever." "sing to me pwease?" Liz said still not noticing the camera. Fire nodded her head and sang A team by Ed Sheeran, liz's favorite song. |
wolfs1999 chapter 1 . 6/16/2014 Name: Dusk Nickname: nope Age: 16 Gender: female Sexuality: homosexual Skin tone: pale Everyday clothing: a black shirt with a red skull in the middle, black baggy jeans, black and red high tops, black over shirt Formal wear: a long light purple form fitting dress, light grey flats and the part of her hair that's usually in her face is tucked behind her ear Swim wear: a purple and grey surfers suit Hair: misty blonde that goes down to her butt and covers her left eye Eyes: icy blue Accessories: a black chain on the right side of her jeans Other features: she has freckles littering her cheeks Personality: she's quiet and childish, but is willing to change the votes Likes: horror movies, horror novels, loud music Dislikes: Chris, preps, jocks, math, and bullies Bio: Her life has been pretty quiet Relationship: if possible with a nice girl Friends: outcasts Enimies: preps, jocks Talents: drawing(though they're usually creepy) Fears: being electrocuted(by a joy buzzer or shock gum) Faults: she can't pay attention Act around Chris: suck up Act around Chef: suck up Act around Blainley: suck up Act around TaJae: suck up Favorite- Band: Smile Empty Soul Singer: Amy Lee from Evanescence Song: Self Inflicted by Smile Empty Soul Actor: Adam Hicks(he plays Luther in Zeke and Luther) Audition tape: The camera turns on showing Dusk sitting on a bed with black sheets and the walls behind her is covered in band posters. "Is it on, mom?" Dusk asks. "Yes, sweetheart," the woman behind the camera says causing Dusk to blush. "I should be in the next season of Total Drama to show that Outcasts can things right!" The camera turns off. Thanks for taking the time to read this. |
The Bronzong Dude chapter 1 . 6/16/2014 Name: Silas DeGroot Nickname: none Age: 16 Gender: male Sexuality: Straight Skin: pale white Clothes: A green, short sleeved, t-shirt, with a plaid scarf, a black eyepatch on his left eye, a black belt with a gold belt buckle and sword holster, a plaid quilt, and black hiking boots. Formal wear: His normal clothes. Swimwear: Plaid trunks Hair color: Brown Style: Messy and short. Accessories: Sword and eyepatch. Personality: Silas is a young, Scottish prince. He is quite friendly and usually quite cheerful. Yet high tempered and quite easy to fool. He, unlike other teens, drinks wine and stuff like that. Though he is somehow unaffected by the side affects, though he can become drunk. He is quite nice and very friendly and loves blood. He collects the heads of his enemies and mounts them on his wall. Though most people dont know about this, but can probably guess due to the blood on his sword. Though has these flaws, he is friendly, bubbly, and cheerful. Though, if you make fun of him for wearing a quilt... You don't wanna know what happens. Likes: Wine, blood, decapitation, jokes, scottish hospitality, friends, and Dawn. ( has a huge crush on her) Dislikes: Being called gay or a girl, Scott, mean people, people calling him a drunken wretch, and being mean. Bio: Too bloody and gory to describe. I'm just gonna say he's a prince in Scotland and he lived in a wealthy castle. Relationship: With Dawn if you can. Friends: Dawn and anybody who can handle his craziness. Enemies: Mean people and Scott. Talents: A great swordsman, good at playing bagpipes, a great cook, great singer. Fears: Dawn rejecting him, Fang. Faults: Sometimes drinks too much. Chris: Very cheerful and often asks where Dawn is. Chef: Very cheerful and often tries to help him with cooking. Blainley: Very snappy and cruel and often tries to chop her head off when she isn't looking. Tajea: Very cheerful. Band: Has none Singer: Dierks Bentley Song: Drunk On A Plane by Dierks Bentley Actor: None Other: Speaks in a Scottish accent and he swears a lot. |