Alright, I'm gonna head out. This version of "Shirou" is too OOC. I wouldn't have cared if you would have put in a modicum of work to show a reason as to why he's suddenly acting so different, but here we are. The entire feel of his character is off. It's like you forcibly pumped in emotions into his character that originally weren't there. In the end, all it did was make his dialogue seemed forced and his interactions awkward.

I like the writing, but as each chapter continues Shirou feels more and more OOC. Honestly, there's not much else I can say besides that. I'm hoping that it's just a one-off thing, but there is a chance you could prove me wrong, hopefully not.

Please continue.

fuck this story is never getting updated is it?

If he chose only one it would probably break several hearts. So I vote harem.

He did not just give up on going home right?

Oh Bedivere is jealous, how cute. I hope he gets together with her. Honestly him being with either Elise or Lina makes no sense. They would just be used against him and cannot protect themselves.

Really...a Tsundere...Also I bet he is really regretting not having Avalon now. It would essentially boost his stamina in a drawn out fight and his hands would have healed during said fight. Now it will take a few weeks to heal fully.

You do remember how much of a monster Lancelot was in Fate Zero right? He nearly matched Arturia. How the heck did Shirou manage to hold out against him?

Stupid. That is basically the only thing that keeps him alive with his suicidal tendencies. He is way to weak right now. When Arturia will use her lance or Excalibur it will literally wipe out armies. Same with Mordred's sword.

Oh little Arturia is starting to have a crush. So cute.

Wow really? Morgana should be more than capable of casting a truth spell on him to find out if he was lying. Also Mordred was a woman just like Arturia.

He has Avalon in him so he should be able to heal really fast. Especially considering the time period he is in. Also why does he not trace a bow and provide cover fire? He is REALLY good with one.

So why does he not know about Mordred and his rebellion? He could tell Merlin since he should know this story with how popular it is. I hope he gets summoned or something to the future so that he is not stuck here.

Why would he get sick? Shirou is numb to such things and used to death so it would not bother him.