No, you change end it here! You have too many loose ends to the up. Charlie and Bill"a bond, how do they finally come together and bond. Singapore's single short sighted attitude, he's as blind as Harry's parents but for different reasons though they boil down to self serving pride. How does Tom Riddle come back into magic without assuming Lord Voldermort's darkness to the extreme. How do the Deadly twins for into this, you reference them as being like Charlie and Bill but don't really get into details, yet they seem to be important to your story. If you finish the story would be making this into a mpreg?
You've brought quite the plot line to the table and obviously started out with a goal. Yes your spelling and grammar needs work. Mainly you need to read your lines out loud, if they don't make sense to you, they won't to us either. Then put it through grammar check to correct the middle words that although spell check may say they are okay, your grammar check will be lighting up like a Christmas tree. Don't ruin a really good story with an inattention to detail, how else will you progress as a writer?

love the story.
please be more soon.
please update the remake on ao3 soon.

please write more soon.

Can’t wait till you post another chapter
I’m not the edge of my seat

I love it so far, I would love to be able to keep up with it

Pleeeeeaaaaasssssee? Any moooooorrrrreee

When are you update time story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next

sad to hear that, as I can never find the storys on that site. Just don't know how to I gess, the filters are confusing and never work like I want.

Bugger it’s been moved over when it was getting good.

Please update this story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next

most unbelievable thing in this story is that Draco is better at potions as a teenager than Snape lol ;)

If it didn't go into details what's the point of having the warning

Damn onion cutting ninjas!

That said, in all honesty while there are some quirks in composition of the story in places but they work for this story and what youve done with it. Youve done an overall good job. I hope you continue and I hope you continue writing in general as well. I look forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for the note

Can't wait! I loved this one! ! !