FUCKING UPDATE ALREADY. now if you really are dead sorry but if you are not, THEN FUCKING UPDATE ALREADY.

Damn,little over two years and still no second chapter or some shit. You said for now...You motherfucker.

Do a time skip to the future and have him more pilot like ie jump pack, wall run

This would be a good idea if it wasn't already RWBY canon for there to be giant robots the size of Titanfall titans, ie, 24 ft.

It's a good idea, and I like the direction but... Please don't take this wrong, the writing style isn't very good.

Try seperating each person's dialogue into a paragraph, I can't tell you how many times I though someone was speaking when they weren't.

If you like, I'd gladly give you my e-mail and handle editing for you. I mean, I LOVE the story and I LOVE helping people out.

Sorry if I was mean.

Needs an epilogue. Also, I don't think breaking up works that way. Breaking up means something happened like a conflict between two people. Not just, "Oh hey I gotta go on this really long trip, but apparently there's a guarantee I'll be back after a really long while. So we're breaking up." That's not how it works. My girlfriend is in Germany right now. I don't know when she'll be back. But we haven't broken up. RWBY has gotta be set some time in the future, so they HAVE to have phones or something.

Lol I'm also making a RWBY-sci-f crossover. Mine is Starcraft. Check it out if you'd like, it's called The Relic of Remnant. If you do check it out, please review. :] Good story so far, but I checked the chapter list. Only 6 chapters? :[

Hey not saying how you should head the story but how bout with some slight canon things like the recon on the wite fang and the like while scott gets his re hab done some and ruby making titans.

I'm done you just sit on the entire storis early xannon and it Pisses me of when people do that.

RWBY/ DESTINY CROSSOVER

rwby skyrim one

Update

I can't wait to read more of this story!

Hope i'm not to late to say I choose the RWBY/Destiny one.

The skyrim/RWBY combo