BEST. STORY. EVER. Hey I have quick question. Could I "borrow" the Skystrikers? If not, i totally understand and I don't want to steal your thunder. After all, YOU are the genius who came up with this. Good luck on future fanfics! Hope to read them son! XD

Wait...am I missing something here? Didn't Bee and Sari first became spark mates after Episode 1? You had a description saying that "Sari's Life as a Transformer" was after...

Dum, Dum, Dum, Mech are up to their old tricks, great chapter, as always, and a great end to that story arc.

Just to let you know, in the US Air Force, the call to salute is 'Present, Arms!' Just to let you know. Anyways, loved the chapter!

Well, that's what I call a really good ending, even the cliffhanger. Can't wait to see what you have in store for the Skystrikers (Though you give a bit of detail in ).

Though I'm a little concerned about is what MECH's cooking. I can tell that they were creating a team of super soldiers and don't have a clue that Raf was still alive. But the one thing I have is that the serum was suppose to work on boys and not girls, since you talked about that in episode 3. Guess this new serum works on both genders, I suppose. But then there's who they are. What their names are, what special talents they have, strengths and weaknesses, the whole deal. I guess the first episode of Skystrickers could give some details.

And I'm hoping that whatever else you're planning could bring a whole lot of moments. Good luck and I'll let you know about my little collaboration we can work on through Gmail.

LuisJM

I sense a sequel series. Am I correct?

I don't think Ratchet would ever describe something as 'sooo cute', was that mean to be an Arcee line?

Who exactly is this Ro guy? Heard from Miko that he's a blue alien but I don't have the slightest of clues on his background. Can you give me some details about him?

I'm missing the cons , can we get a chapter just for them?

Sentinel is up to his old offensive tricks again ;P, great chapter, but I do think that June is a bit to open with people she's just met, I do like the inclusion of the other races of Autobots, not many remember them.

Finally caught up. Just found your stories and loved every second of them. Now to return to ch. 1 for a nice reread. Cant wait for your next chapter!

Great chapter! Can't wait to read more! :)

So, good chapter, but Sari is in two places, she is on the ship to Deneb IV, and talking to Miko, and Jack after his surgery.

Cool chapter i cant wait to see what happens to raf i hope they can help him

Slight plot hole, shouldn't they just bridge him directly to base?