almost as screwed up as terra...

Fascinating...

I haven't actually read many exposes on how Jade feels about Artemis, mainly because she's normally represented as a cruel and calculating mercenary in a lot of the fics I've read.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading how you dissected Jade's feelings and emotions and the crippling guilt she feels for abandoning Artemis. Also, the segment where you differentiated, compared and contrasted between Cheshire and Jade was what interested me the most.

Fantastic one-shot!

WOW! Love this look into Jade's thought process about Artemis. Totally on-spot!

Very nicely done. That is what big sisters are for.

Awwww! Big sis/little sis relationships are so AWESOME! And its true, jade does love her little sis...:)

This is awesome. Cheshire is such a wonderful character to write about :)

I love this story, Jade isn't OOC at all! Nor is Artemis! It's so hard to find fanfics like this these days!
{Sigh} Silly humans- wait, I meant people, cause I'm human! Totally! Not an alien! {Nervous laughter}

Wow. I loved this. You did an awesome job reflecting on the relationship between Artemis and Cheshire, and I loved how you viewed each of them as two separate people (Jade Nguyen is different from Cheshire, Artemis Crock is different from Artemis). That was a nice touch, and I really liked the way you viewed Cheshire's thoughts and outlook on the situation. Overall amazing job!

This was brilliantly done.
A lot of one shots that focus on Artemis and Jade's relationship oftentimes make one or the other ooc but you kept Jade perfectly in character. The way you wrote her inner dialogue made her struggle understandable and the distinction between Chesire and Jade was well done. I really loved it! :)

S.S.

This is a really great story, I love it! As a fellow Young Justice fan we all could see Jade having a conflicted issue with her emotions in season one and this would be great to put in (with the writers having the last word for editing.) I will always love Artemis and Jade as sisters.

Keep writing:).

That was good :) I've always thought Artemis's family connectionx were a bit weird. Like on one hand, Sportsmaster and Cheshire consider her as an enemy, but then they are also family, and Sportsmaster and Chesire visited Artemis's 'grave' in Season 2, and Cheshire wanted to avenge her. I find that kinda complicated.

Great story.

Love this!

.teardrop* that was beautiful