Awww. This made me to cry, I swear. I just love everything about it. Seeing this part of Tomoko makes me sad TT

Awww! So kawaii! Loved it!

Omg so sad :'(

This was...different, and i really liked it. I felt like you took a take on discovering Tomoko this time, rather than Tomoki. It's interesting, now that i'm noticing it, that reading her ordinary school days all over again makes me understand how monotone it must feel. how colorless and grey. You also took a more serious take on the more difficult part of their relationship; the jealousy, the confusion, the fact that they have drifted so far away from each other, even though they live under the same roof. But of course, neither would probably want things to stay that way. it's not all humor and fun with these two. not all secondhand embarrassment and sexual innuendos. it felt refreshing.

Thanks for the interesting read.

Interesting, I really like the idea of tomoko having some kind of illness. Very emotional, thoroughly enjoyed it.

Good take on tomokiko . however ill still be waiting for the continuation of stay awake I loved how this started out though, you should make it into a full spin-off story xD