It's up! It's up! the sequel is up! later!

Denra

I just finished this. It ended kind of abruptly. You might want to round out the endng more.

It was an interesting idea, but you really need to work on grammer and pucntuation and pacing. A good beta can help you with that.

Also, you might try writing it more like a story and less like a screenplay. People tend to respond better to a story format.

Lastly, the dialogue is completly overshadowing the action. I know that sometimes I have problems with my stories having a good balance. It's just something that comes with practice.

I hope these ideas help you.

I REALLY LOVE READING THIS FIC! pLEASE, CONTINUE!

It's really good. but i love it! write more please!

Nice job. But is this the end? Is there more? Let us know. _~

good.

ME

great great great! WAY MORE PLEASE!

ME

I like the story but sometimes you know it's made up and that's pity...

OMG chapter 23 already? I can't believe it. Go you! Please write more soon.

That was really good. You maniged to get both Charlie and Case, and Jace and Mini Max in, plus Hannah. Very nice, though I think that they would all have a lot of trouble, with Lydecker being there. Seeing as they all have all suffered some loss because of him. Please post more soon. _~

That was good. I really liked the part where she explained to Sketchy about Bruno. But I find it hard to belive that she would apologize to Lydecker for useing him. Please do Charlie and Case next, and above all, post more soon. _~

That was cool. I cant' wait to read more. pLease update soon. :D:D:D

Alright already. I'm reading it, I'm reading it.

You have 67 reviews, how many do you need to feel wanted.

I have no ideas who the Sketchmaster should talk to next. I'm only a reader. If I had ideas I'm be a writer.

Keep up the good work. We're with you all the way. More Logan please.

I'm reading..

Like it, but it's kinda irritating with the Max:, Logan: Can't you change that? Then is would be grate!