Reviews for One step at a time
lhatz1 chapter 13 . 2/19/2019
excellent story thanks for sharing this masterpiece
TamaraJagellovsk chapter 13 . 11/18/2014
Read this one in one go - almost - since I'm dealing with some family stuff :-) AND I LIKED IT! finally someone took the time to let Jack make a realistic recovery. Thank you!
lilawonder chapter 10 . 11/18/2014
I don't think I have ever done this but I am reviewing your AN. What you said in your AN was painful and true. If only more people had the care for this world that you do...Thank you for your important and thoughtful author's note.
Hazmatt chapter 13 . 8/25/2014
Amazing story! I really enjoyed it!
fnfnztri chapter 13 . 8/20/2014
Really great story, it was a great ride. You captured Jack's emotional state and recovery quite well. It was cute that Carter was going out of her way to keep the map from Jack's sight. Hope you're still going to write new Stargate ff!
Guest chapter 13 . 8/16/2014
Well paced and insightful story. I read it in one shot - couldn't put it down! Please post anything that you have collecting dust, I'm sure the readers will appreciate it, and/or if the muse strikes you - a new story! You have a wonderful writing talent.
LadyMo chapter 13 . 8/15/2014
Great chapter and story. I like the way you ended it. His first mission after what happened to him. I am sure that it actually helped him in many ways. Helped him get back to himself. He was there for himself, for Earth, for his team especially his newest member. Definitely a good thing for him.
:-)
BerlinBear chapter 13 . 8/14/2014
Great last chapter! I'm a little sad that this story is over now, but on the other hand I'm happy that Jack is better. It was a very good idea to include the following episode of Abyss. That way it feels much more real and in the show.
Like in the previous chapters I especially liked the conversations between Doc. Fraiser and Jack. She is a wonderful character and you captured her well. General Hammond was awesome in this chapter, too. Did Jack really break the other window? Would like to hear Hammond's explanation to Siler.
Thank you again for writing this story, I definitely enjoyed reading it!
PatriciaS chapter 13 . 8/13/2014
Good ending to an interesting story, Like Hammond's understanding attitude to Jack's actions.

Return to Hell sounds, good ... not only keep us out of trouble but you as well. :)
Also so hope you get the go ahead for the others, Thanks for sharing.
kahuna chapter 13 . 8/13/2014
Thanks for posting this story. I would love to see Return to Hell. In fact, feel free to update more than once per week : ) if you can.

If you can't, that's OK too.
Yol chapter 13 . 8/12/2014
Thanks for this story, really enjoyed reading it. Also would be looking forward to any other stories you plan to share with us.
Guest chapter 13 . 8/12/2014
One of the best I have read. Looking forward to more of your work.
jchristi22 chapter 13 . 8/12/2014
Thank you soo much for posting this story! Absolutely love it!
dpdp chapter 13 . 8/12/2014
Great story. Excellent ending. would love to read "Return to Hell" and your stories coauthored with BadgerGater.
Guest chapter 13 . 8/12/2014
This is an amazing story. You showed Jack's vulnerability in such a way that you realized his strength of character all the more for pulling through. More of your work - both old and new would be most welcome.
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