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I love how the melt each others clothes and maybe as a result jack has a little bit of an ice clothing fetish! It's just fun to think about. :) great job! This was so cute!

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Oh my gosh

I nearly burst out laughing

I loved your fic! *thumbs up!* and the idea of her clothes melting was absolutely clever! Nice piece!

OH MY FUCKING GOD YES THIS ISGREAT

i always thought jelsa would be the death of me and you miss have proved me right cuz girl i just DIED . PS: that means it was AWESMAZEING

Hawt. Wow. Lol.

Oh my god. Wow. I loved it. Well done! You are so good at writing smut. Please write more ESPECIALLY Jelsa smut. they're my OTP.

OH MY GOD! You are a GENIUS, repeat GENIUS! Using the line "love will thaw" to create this idea! Hahahaha! Smart! People give this writer a medal! Haha, well done on this story, really a great fanfic! It was very smart of you to think up of this idea. Congrats! Feyfa

This is a good story, but I can't help but feel a little weird about the... yeah. Since I've always seen Jack as just a little kid who wants to have fun. BUT this was amazingly written, so I'll look away from the whole 'kid-bangs-grown-woman' thing. Will be checking out your other stories, too!

JFC that was H-O-T! I actually have thought about this, too. It makes a lot of sense that Elsa should be able to do this XD.

Beautifully written and the dialogue was great!