Great story good job

Great job! Very thorough. (BTW, your mention to Lazik here seems a bit misplaced? Human Traffic didn't happen until after he was there liaison.) You gave Marty a full life with friends and family, but what I most appreciated was that there was always a hole in his life waiting to be filled by his Wonder Woman, Kensi. Nicely done.

Please take this as the compliment that it is when I say, you scare me! It can't be easy to kill off two such lovable and important OC's as Sam and Brian. You are really scary. And that makes the story better because I can't assume that the good guys are all going to make it out alive.

He does maim so beautifully. I often think of Maxie Kay's description when I read such fine maiming. ;-)

No Sam no! Did I say "heartwarming"? No, I think I meant heartbreaking. I loved Sam so much!

You are killing me with this story, with poor little Marty, who's finally found someone to take good care of him. So heartwarming!

Thank you so much for making an amazing story! :)

Loved it, full day of emotions, made me cry, laugh etc.

Sorry I haven't reviewed for ages, I was away with no WiFi and then real life got in the way of me reading any fan fiction!
I have just read the last 15 chapters in one sitting and all I can say is WOW! I have loved this story, some chapters made me feel uncomfortable, some sad and sometimes I laughed out loud which irritates my partner! From the few clues the show has given us I feel that your story really fleshed out deeks' character, it was very plausible and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
I am really looking forward to your next story thank you for taking the time to share your ideas with us.

I loved the story and miss Marty and his life story.

What a great ending a great story

I said it before but I'll say it again - you wrote aj awesome story here and I just love it! I just love the way you write an pay attention to all the little details! Thank you for this story!

I have read the story through and have loved the story from start to finish well done and well written.

I've been following this story since chapter 1. A great story from start to finish!

Génial ! J'ai beaucoup apprécié les albums photos. J'ai relu toute l'histoire, tout se tient. Félicitations !