BIG LOVE

Adorable, I love it

Hello! I read this all over two days! Loved it. *tears that it's over* thank You!

it was really a good story I read it in one go

This is great, awesome, wonderful, amazing, fantastic LawLu fanfic. i love how you create the pace, not slow and it not like such in a rush and steady oh i love it. LawLu is my second ship in One Piece fandom after ZoSan and i'm kind of ummm a little sad cause you pair them with the girls but it's okay i dont care cause the LawLu sooooo adorableeeeeeee here. and thank you for making this fic i love you so much

Man if this fanfiction was made into a lawlu doujinshi it would be so wonderful and awesome.

I loved it. It was so awesome. A lot of Grammer mistakes but overall a great story.

Damn... I don't even know where to begin. I guess first I should congratulate you for this wonderful story you wrote. you made me ship Law and Luffy so hard after reading it. this is one of my top five fanfic and I've read it more than two times, it's just perfect. you made me laugh, cry, feel anxious, angry and so many other feelings...
I love the way you showed us Law's and Luffy's past and all the mystery around their mothers. Even their personalities was interesting especially being able how Luffy grew through the years.
did you plan the story before you started? because if you didn't and this was the final result then you are a genius!
By the way that little touch with Ace not accepting them was just perfect and hilarious I laugh so hard at his reaction.

Really good story.

a request for special chapter on TopLuffyxTraffy. heheheh Luffy's definitely grown over the years, and certainly he wants to experiment as well. hehhehe i wanna see Law moaning hahahahah

Your story was simply amazing. It was so good! It made me cry and laugh and the live they had was so beautiful. Thank you for making this, I absolutely loved it! LawxLuffy is my favorite pairing and this made me so happy! Its so well written you did an awesome job!

Make a sister srtory with ace strugleing in the other room lol! That is if you haven't araedy: )

I think i'm fallin in love with law,
a doctor, genius doctor at that,
caring, patient, possessive, handsome and rich guy,
uh oh, my type to the T
if only my fiancé could be like that, wkwk

This story was amazing, funny, and really sexy at the end! I love it and I will be looking out to see if you make another Law x Luffy story like this.

Well, I just finished reading the story to the end... that was steamy and adorable at some parts :} I liked how they actually got 2 daughters at the end, that was unexpected, and how they named them was sweet! Ace was also awesome, I love how you depicted him. I would've liked to see how everyone else had also turned out after 20 years though, especially Ace and Sabo. This story was fun to follow and very interesting and well-written. Thank you for that! ;)