Plz, update!

Please update. It’s been two years and this masterpiece is not finished-but is so damn close to being so. Amazing story and writing.

Oh man, it's been over a year and a few months since you update. I'm worried and nervous that you might forget about this story and/or unmotivated to continue! This has been an amazing story so far. I've been reading it all yesterday at school, sneaking my phone while reading it. And in between classes too. Keep up the good work!

Woah, t-this hit

Oh wow. Very detailed. When my eyes landed on the word 'phlegem' I knew right away you're a good write and this story will be good haha.

Cliffy! I wanna read what happens. Please update soon! Like real soon?

I honestly loved every second of this. And that kiss wow

I think i'am in love with this story, can't wait for the next

I hope you’ll write another story about them, I love this couple and you are so talented !

(From France)

One of my favourite story. I love it !

Earlier in the story the team was going to get disbanded and Ino drafted into ROOT because Tsunade was sifting through their ranks for ninja who weren't loyal to Konoha and they wanted to play hard ball with her and show her they went gonna take it lying down and take one of her best (perhaps all of them eventually) if the team couldn't get its act together on missions. Now Danzo is mysteriously alive again and ROOT is fine. Consistency oversight much?

"She's no Ten-Ten" ...they're saying that like Ten-Ten is some great kunoichi. What is so noteable about Ten-Ten? All she does is throw weapons without showing a shred of efficiency with a single one of them.

This slipped off into cliche too soon. Too damn soon. It seems that fan-fiction authors are doomed to recreate each other's mistakes and cliches. One chapter he's dying and the next they're already in the trap of this fiction's Romance? I don't know what to say. Perhaps you should've slowed down?

The writing's all right, but that's just about it. Good luck in your future chapters.

So happy with this update and the kiss thank you

Wonderful story, i love it and I'am so glad to have discovered it. Now i need the next chapters lol.
Thank you for your time