Until now I’ve already read 2/3 of it and I can't help stopping to review it first. It's sooo beautifully written! Atem is soooo sweet! I fancy the way he treated Anzu so much!

I always find myself coming back to this story because it is so beautifully written. This is one of the first Revolutionshipping fics that I read many years ago, and it made me fall in love with the pairing that much more. I love your detailed descriptions of everything that Anzu feels throughout the course of this story, from her fear of being vulnerable to the way that Dark Yugi makes her feel safe. The care with which Dark Yugi treats Anzu is very sweet as well. Thank you so much for sharing this story!

Beautiful yet heart wrenching:")

That was beautiful. I understand completely how a male can make a female feel delicate. How you wrote this perfectly mirrors how someone once made me feel. He was actually the one who pointed it out to me. I know exactly how she's feeling. I literally felt everything you described. This truly brought tears to my eyes.

This was really amazing. I love how you conveyed Anzu's insecurity here and her hesitation to feel more like a lady out of fear that she'll be hurt. That was really clever. You write extremely well. I would say more about this fic, but honestly this one rendered me speechless. It's just really sweet how deeply Dark Yugi (or Yami as I like to call him) cares for Anzu. Great work. :D

Me quede con ganas de mas *-* ! Senti una gran calidez en el pecho al leer esto, es hermoso

I'm not crying, It's allergies and being awake at 7am in the morning. THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL!

i adore this great work!

I love it!

Loved it.

I could just imagine everything going on here in this fic. I love how you connected Dark Yugi’s power over Anzu to her feeling delicate around him. I also enjoyed how he massaged her and the way he romantically takes care of her while she’s so vulnerable being with him. I feel warm and fuzzy and thrilled inside. Loved it.

really nice one shot!

Oh my Arceus. I loved that! Possible sequel maybe? :D

beautiful story! i love it!, the fandom needs more revolution/vanish fanfiction
i hope you write another one soon :D

wow what a story i loved it please do another