AWESOME STORY

PLEASE KEEP GOING

MORE PETER AND EVVIE

Ahhh I am LOVING this fic! Evvie is such a well-written character! I really hope you decide to continue it.

OKAY HURT MY FEELINGS RIGHT OFF THE STARTING LINE, JUST RIP MY HEART OUT THANK YOU SO MUCH!

((It was a brilliant start btw))

B-BUT MY HEART STRINGS THEY ARE PULLING ALREADY OMIGOD

I know it's been quite a while since u last updated, but I really want to know how these two end up together. Please update

Road is hilarious, I wish he was in the actual movie so we'd have more of him. His character is so much fun- I'm glad evvie is doing better and has some friends

LMAO SHE MEETS TOAD AND IMMEDIATELY PASSES OUT poor girl's gone through so much. It's interesting to see how canon changes with evvie in the story now! Hank choosing to get rid of the serum and Charles willing to use cerebro now that his daughter is gone is fascinating~ plus, Peter still thinking about her even after they part ways is adorable. I hope he's back soon!

Mmm Charles being so protective of his daughter is absolutely adorable. Kinda sucks for hank, since he lost her and everything, but like- this is hilarious. Evvie is in good hands with Alex, and even though I totally didn't expect him to show up (or have have a thing for her? Lol) it was a good plot device and I'm glad he's in the story. Havoc is always so much fun to read

Things are shaping up! The mystery of evvie's mother has got me hooked- though I have my suspicions. Poor kid though, I can't imagine it'd be easy what with all this stress at 16. Thank god logan the matchmaker is there to pull some strings in the background. Good chapter!

Logan is clearly a mastermind is he's planning all this out. It's almost too cruel to Charles- but then again, hes gotta have to let go sometime, right? Love will save the world. Love. Will. Save. The. World.

The bickering is So Good. SO GOOD!

That meet-cute was MAGIC! ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE! God Logan dating their future daughter was a plot twist I didn't see coming, but now it just adds to the stakes. Logan, you've got this!

chapter two Evvie is so cOOL! she didn't even hesitate to help out, i love that. Her and Hank's relationship is adorable, even though it's probably going to be an issue later on (what with romance on the horizon with peter, lol). Logan is Too Relatable, I love the way you wrote him.

chapter two is also so sTRONG! Very angsty, super fun to read. when it comes out that they had kids together and Charles was a grandfather, I gasped. I love this story so much!

I remember starting this fic a long while ago, saving it for when i had enough time to read it all, and i remember how much i lOVE THE INTRO! It starts off so STRONG and i dearly love how you decided to write this, im so happy to have picked up this fic again. Wonderful!

Okay that was too cute! Ugh, I just have a feeling Crystal will pop out at the most inconvienent time and stir up trouble. He should just break up with her already! He obviously has a thing for Evvie! Even if he himself doesn't realize it yet, he should know it's strong enough for him to break things off with that other girlie. Well hopefully things looks up for Evvie soon, thanks for the chapters and please update soon! :)