Reviews for Deep, Deep Down - FrUK
Pap Lal chapter 4 . 6/3
AmeriPan is so cute
0FantasyismyReality0 chapter 1 . 5/10/2019
Bruh that reference to the Paint It White dub at the end was perfect lmao
Guest chapter 4 . 11/27/2018
Ooooh! :o more! :D
Guest chapter 4 . 8/19/2018
Aww! Fruk and Ameripan in one fic!? Two of my otp's in the same story!? You sure are spoiling us readers, author-senpai.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/27/2018
BOI, ENGLAND, DON'T HIT THAT BOY JUST CAUSE YOU'RE BLIND
Guest chapter 4 . 5/27/2018
See its not incest, England found America in a field
Moon chapter 1 . 2/21/2018
wOAH-

now I wonder what would happen if the maid walked in XD
Peggy chapter 4 . 10/13/2017
Amazing. Wonderful story. One of the best I have ever read
Yaoi fan chapter 1 . 8/15/2017
Holy crap, that was Amazing!
CharizardTitan chapter 1 . 7/18/2017
This is beautiful
AnnaBella chapter 4 . 6/8/2017
"Besides, FrUK is more kawaii, ja?"

Yes, and it is not incest. XD Even England agrees with me. "You're an idiot," he said. "That's incest. I raised you. It would never have happened."

I just hope UsUk shippers would realize that too. XD

Nice story, but in my opiniom Japan's feelings for Alfred came out of blue and Kiku/Alfred ending feels just fake and forced. It's not realistic that Alfred would get over England so soon and if he did... then it jus proves he never really cared about England and his feelings for both Arthur and Kiku are more unhealthy obsession than genuine romantic feelings.

#France&EnglandForever
AnnaBella chapter 3 . 6/8/2017
Why isnt the door locked? It was in the last chapter; "England practically tackled him to the floor once the door was locked behind them." So why it isnt locked now?

Oh boy, Alfred is such an obsessed whiny bastard. What makes him think that England is obligated to tell him anything? England should really stay away from him as far as possible.

"Why do you even need to know?" he demanded. "Why do you even bloody care?! What difference is it going to make in your pathetic lives?!"

What England said to other nations was really badass. The same thing should be said everyone who like to gossip. (Even though I think that nations gossip a lot because that's what politics is really about XD)
AnnaBella chapter 2 . 6/8/2017
Um, why are they waking up in England's room? Didn't they had sex in France's office/bedroom or whatever in the last chapter? Did they interrupted their love making and hen went to England's room to sleep? Why did they do that? Sorry for nitpicking but this is so confusing... O.o

But good chapter. The usa is so annoying...
AnnaBella chapter 1 . 6/8/2017
Oh yeah, FRUK FOREVER! However there are some tiny contradictions in this chapter.

"France paced his bedroom"
""Come in," France said, sitting on his desk just as that very Englishman walked into his office"

So are they in France's office or in his bedroom? Which onexis it? Or is that room both office and bedroom? Why didnt they made love on the bed then?

"He slammed his fists against his desk angrily. What in the hell was going on with the Englishman?"

And 10 seconds later...

"Don't try to hide it," he whispered. "You're in love vith me."

How did France figured it out SO fast? O.o It's never explained.
RandomBushGirl chapter 4 . 2/21/2017
okay
never thought I would hear myself say this...
But I think I might be starting to ship Ameripan now...
just a teensy bit...
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