| Reviews for Second Time Around Year 2 |
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  Matt chapter 1 . 8/6 You do know that metamorphmagus is all one word, not two the way you keep writing it? Just saying... |
 gabzep chapter 12 . 4/4 I’m glad they took care of the bully early on. Poor Luna. |
| D.J. Scales chapter 10 . 12/10/2019 Interesting chapter. |
| Kushka chapter 12 . 9/30/2019 Great story |
| Saissa chapter 6 . 6/17/2019 Colin really should not be sending moving pictures to his muggle family - that actually breaks the statute of secrecy! And Colin really needs to understand when someone says No they mean NO. otherwise Colin is nothing but an obsessed stalker! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/6/2018 It's a pretty cool story, and I'm glad you've finished it. There are a couple this I like to point out about your writing: (read in Hermione's voice) first of all, it's ' dormItories ', not ' dormAtories ' :P. Secondly, at the beginning of a sentence, when you're giving a setting, this should be separated from the rest of the sentence by a comma (this is dubbed external complement -if I'm translating it correctly-, it is a common rule for English and Latin-based languages) i.e.: Earlier that day, Harry met with Sirius at Headquarters. *Hermione's spirit leaves. Again, kudos, my friend. I'm looking forward to year 5 of the 'Harry slithers in' series. XD |
| Razeus1 chapter 7 . 10/2/2018 Ooookay...so Hermione is allowed to be rude and not be called out on it, but she can rabid about other people's supposed rudeness...? HYPOCRITE, much! I really despise this aspect of her very much. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/4/2018 What a prick he chose a party over picking up Harry. Neglectful guardian maybe Albus was right. |
| Cassandra30 chapter 12 . 6/26/2018 Terrific! Honestly Lockhart should not have been so susceptible. |
| Cassandra30 chapter 11 . 6/26/2018 Excellent plan. Harry handled the bullying well but so did the Professors. |
| Cassandra30 chapter 10 . 6/26/2018 Apparently he forgot about Luna being bullied. |
| Cassandra30 chapter 9 . 6/26/2018 Most excellent! |
| Cassandra30 chapter 8 . 6/26/2018 Excellent about Hagrid! Should have happened the first time through. Manipulative old goat. |
| Cassandra30 chapter 7 . 6/26/2018 Hermione is both stubborn and willfully blind. Her attitude isn't logical either. Something she prides herself on. The Timeline in each book overlaps so badly it is impossible for them to be accurate. As for the elves thing ... she needs to do her homework or shock her by truly explaining things. Ask her if she wants to kill all the elves. |
| Cassandra30 chapter 6 . 6/26/2018 Harry actually should befriedn Colin. He might be more likely not to get himself killed that way. |
