What a gripping story! Hope to see an update soon.

Please Update

Amazing chapter

Update? Love the story

OH MY GOSH THIS IS AMAZING! What does this mean? Was she in a coma this whole time? Or is this a flashback? AHHH! This is the best thing I've read since Hotel Paper! Keep going!

Just read this whole story, and it's great! Somewhat confusing at times, but I think that's on purpose because it's all coming from Katniss and she's in a very bad place during most of the story. I love how you've given us pieces of Katniss' history throughout, so I feel like we know most of what has happened in her life to make her the way she is. I do really hope you'll give us more details of Peeta's history, though. It seems like he's been through a lot. Katniss was so clever in this chapter. I would never have thought to do what she did in the bathroom! I'm thinking this chapter has ended with Katniss running into the police as they were coming to rescue her from the garage (and then morphing into a flashback, correct?), so I hope she will be ok eventually. Poor Peeta is going to feel SO guilty for not staying with her to get her car taken care of! I hope you'll be back soon...

I love this. I find it confusing as hell and eish for more clarity sometimes but I don't think you should fulfil that wish because I also think that the story is perfect how it is. And me wishing for that is kinda like an expression for that. Because I get the feeling that's how your katniss feels just a thousend times stronger. I love it!

Ohh please tell me they didn't catch her! Great chapter as always

Ohmygod you're killing me. So tense, I can barely take it. I just need poor Katniss to be okay and find Peeta again and aghhhhh. Amazing.

What the heck?

I very much like this story, and I like the character development. But I must admit it's very confusing and I find myself constantly rereading to try and understand what's happening. Even the flashbacks are kinda vague. Katniss is kidnapped is Madge still alive at this point?

I love reading this story. The way you write it is perfect and it makes me feel and see everything(I don't know if that makes sense) I always get really excited when you update, thank you for sharing this with us

Oh god! The suspense is killing me! Please update

Uodate soon please!

Oh god no no no no... You took my breath away. I'm terrified! And just when things were looking brighter for poor Katniss!

Thank you for the update - heartbreak and all. :(