Wish you’d finished this

I'm shocked to be saying this but I found myself breezing through for Clara moments. I'm a hardcore fan now it's crazy. I like it more as a pairing. I look forward to your alternate ending. I SO surprised m of not liking Karma at all. Great story. Love the angst

It's been bugging me for a while and it always annoys me each time I reread this and I realized I've never commented on it. It really doesn't make sense why Amy would freak out about going over the cliff's ledge in the previous chapter when on the show she regularly goes onto the roof to get away form Karma. Karma is the one that's terrified of heights...not Amy. But in the previous chapter Amy was acting like she was the one with the fear of heights and in this chapter Karma treats that cliff's ledge like it's nothing. That really isn't canon and most of this story is canon well the characters are super out of character like the strange ways Amy acts throughout this story. But for the most part you stated this takes place after the events that happened in season one because Amy still fucked Liam and confessed her love to Karma. So assuming this is mostly canon shouldn't it be Karma that freaks out when storming out of that cave to get away from Amy...not Amy acting like a giant baby when going over the cliff's edge to get to the cave? I don't know it always bothered me that you made Amy the one afraid of heights when we all know that prize goes to Karma. Karma's the one with the crippling fear of heights. Sorry I just felt the need to comment on this otherwise it would just continue to bother me.

P.S. I'm assuming you abandoned the fandom altogether given the show's cancellation. So you most likely won't read this, I just felt the need to point this out in the story.

I'm excited for the alternate ending I want to clarmy

Fucking Karma smh always ruining things smh this is why I'm clarmy trash they need to leave their jaded past and get together

I'm clamy trash I swear this chapter just solidified it smh karma doesn't stand a chance in my book

He'll nah, I'm over karma and here selfish asshole smh I'm team Clara all the way

Please tell me this is getting updated?! This fic is everything.

Pleeeeease update :)

I'm hoping for some more Clara and Amy time once they get back there haha karma can wait, cause we all know Amy did ;)

Can someone please just kill Liam. Lol

God you pin point the characters so well, so easy to read and follow. Will be interested to see how you deal with them returning to Austin. Although I almost want them to never leave Arizona

Even a jealous karma! Make her work for it

God I cannot wait until they go home and have to deal with the real world! Bring on the angst. I hope Amy and Clara stay in contact though heheheh I'm all about that karmy but there's something about those two that I just can't stop shipping

It's a piece of heaven on earth when you read the couple you have been shipping in a very good mood...just hope that Karma is good...but i want to see Amy taking care of a sick Karma...oh...oh...love reading them in a very light mood. thank you...