I really love this story. Please don't let this be the end.

First off, I want to say that this story is incredible. I love how things developed gradually. It's been over a year and I still anxiously await for the conclusion of the story. I wish you would update. Hope you are doing well.

more please...

Either she is pretending to be his enemy to confuse Baragor or she really is. Whatever the case wounded Hans is in big trouble. Don't let him die. This cliffhanger is quite agonizing

His determination go and save Elsa (and tell her he loves her) even if in the process he almost drowned was admirable. I liked his vision of the four of them happy together.

There was no chance Anna would have stayed behind! He may do difficult things for love but it worths it.

I like this chapter. Keep it up! And Hans's words at the end of the chap reminds me of those of Jaime Lannister in A Song of Ice and Fire.

After the mocking Anna and Hans managed actually to talk and I liked that he opened up.
the final countdown has begun.

Anna was quiet*

This is building up to quite a crescendo! I actually loved this particular Hans and Anna interaction. It felt real, deep and mature. They both understood the stakes and saw past the petty residual hatred.

I didn't like Illyana but I didn't want her to suffer that horrible torture. Baragor may think he has the upper hand but I hope Elsa will end him and the pirates for good.

Poor Illyana, never thought I'd say that but ugh what they did to her was so gross and excessive. So I kinda blanked out about when exactly Baragor captured the Queen but I'm excited to see the last 6 chapters play out!

Elsa has a plan to save her kingdom and themselves. that's good!
thanks for the clarification about Hans.

Anna spilled out the secret about Elsa's powers. good job Anna! Hans was disappointed and I liked it. Although his intention was good and wanted to say it aloud, the I love you was a little out of place the way he told it.

Hans thinking of his child and being afraid if it is a girl and the dangers of the world was lovely. What was that at the end?! This complicates the relationships between them. Update soon (without punching your pc) this is so interesting development

Aaahh! She figured out of what it is going on with Elsa and Hans and she is still not believing it or what Elsa has said. So frustrating!