Reviews for Lionsnake Chronicles IV: Harry and the Three Knights
Pat chapter 20 . 9/1/2019
I've been re-reading fanfics I've previously bookmarked... and I must say, if I were your version of Harry, I'd surely have cracked completely by the end of book 3, if not much sooner. I'm still considering whether I'd murder nasty Augusta, wimpy Neville, annoying Draco, and blows-hot-and-cold Snape... Maybe it's a good thing for my mental health, that you never completed this series!
sahar.r chapter 20 . 3/9/2019
the intriguing relationship between snape and harry is on of the strongest attraction of this series. i'm really curious of what's going to happen next and i sincerely hope you continue this enjoyable series.
siany14 chapter 20 . 6/6/2018
I really am enjoying your series I hope you continue it
wokanshutaiduo chapter 20 . 5/1/2018
is Harry asexual? also is theo really trans and is this ever going to be mentioned in the story again? cause if not it feels like only token representation
elderscrolls master chapter 20 . 10/16/2017
Ok finally finished it. So I rate it 4/5 stars the plot was good and while I would like a couple side story's to go along with the main story. You lost a star due to the fails romance scenes which are best discriped as a plane trying and failing to take off. The first 1 or 2 scenes easily showed Harry wasn't intrested in dating, but after that it felt like you were teasing the aduience. They were needed and were annyoing. I also like to point out why did he ask Tracy if he was worried about rejecion, Daphne clear would have said yes and unless Harry has feeling for Tracy there was no reason to ask her. Still it could have been worse it could have been Ginny. (I will stop reading if she is pair with Harry) Hoping that you will give him a girlfriend in 5th year like Luna (my favorite pair with Harry) or Daphne .
elderscrolls master chapter 12 . 10/15/2017
Why is Harry acting like an idiot hasn't he start puberty yet?
Guest chapter 12 . 10/14/2017
Please stop making Harry retarded aroud girls seriously no one acts like this ever.
Guest chapter 11 . 10/14/2017
Please please have Harry take Daphne to the ball please.
Guest chapter 7 . 10/14/2017
Since the story already finished it useless but can you not make harry an idiot when it comes to women. He should have ask out Daphine to the ball if nothing else as a cover. I really hope you don't pare him with the Indian chick again or Ginny.
Vampireking40 chapter 2 . 5/12/2017
A little change in the way the final score is set, but we still had the appearance of Death Eaters and the Dark Mark.
Pat chapter 20 . 12/11/2016
I've been reading the entirety of The Lionsnake Chronicles - to the detriment of my normal activities... I doubt I'm exaggerating when I say I've read hundreds of Harry Potter fanfics - and this series is, without question, among the *very best*.

I will be starting part 5 immediately upon finishing this review. I don't know yet whether you've ended the series there, or have started writing more. While I would love to read a full seven years' worth - or more - of your writing, instead I'll encourage you to leave JK Rowling's world, and create your own. You have more than enough talent to become a published writer. And if that happens, I do hope I'll encounter your works!

Best wishes,
Pat*
Invisible Observer chapter 20 . 9/11/2016
I feel that Sirius made a mistake by rebuffing his cousins Narcissa and Draco. Look forward to reading about Harry's fifth year.
Invisible Observer chapter 19 . 9/11/2016
I'm disappointed, but not quite surprised, that Principal Oke was a mole. Sad that Harry's wand was destroyed so soon. Harry's tantrum, as Snape calls it, is annoying.
Invisible Observer chapter 13 . 9/10/2016
Harry was a good friend to Tracey and Hermione. Hope that you will eventually get away from canon pairings of Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione.
Invisible Observer chapter 9 . 9/9/2016
Definitely liking Principal Oke. I loved how she dealt with the Weasley twins and how she points out some of the glaring problems of the British wizarding world.
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