I like this chapter but it seems like it’s a little bit rush because I’m unsure where did they do the intimate sex. Is it still in the infirmary? But anyways still love it.

WHO CREATED SAISEI?

Simplemente bellisima esta historia eres grande volvi nuevamente a enamorarme de natsume con su forma de pantera *-*.aunque seria mas kawaii que mikan uviera sido un neko para que se conlleven mejor (ya sabes, canino felino no se conllevan muy bien) pero aparte de eso estuvo mas que bella te atmiro, espero que puedas seguir escribiendo mas historias del shipeo de NaMi _ XD.

One of the best story ive ever heard that had an actual plot with lemon. I really liked it. Please make more stories as great as these!

This story is very beautifully written, though I feel the ending 2 chapters were really rushed and I think you could develop an 'after story' for us with Mikan and Natsume, it would be amazing :)

The marking part sounds like a inuyasha fanfic SesshomaruXKagome

Great story, i wish it would go on can you make a little story about Natsume and Mikan and there happily ever after or the an insight about there new life together. " Cause in the real novel they don't even give a insight about there new life together you know. I'm not tight to pressure you into make a another chapter or anything, i'm just saying.0

awesome! A big hug for LunaGem, I love you!

I love this story! you seriously made my day thank you!

I'ts perfect

Love this story... youre a good writer

I really love this story! :)

Aww that's was a good story

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Absolutely wonderful. I honestly didn't expect it to be this good (no offense) seeing as how the plot was so drastically different from the original manga. Good work!