Really like this story, I know you haven't updated in a while but I do hope you continue it. By the way how would Gideon feel about all this?

I can not stop laughing with Stan thinking about not spending money!

I went back and reread every chapter just so I can get a fresh feeling of the new chapter and I got to stay I'm glad you haven't given up on the story even if you have to take your time with it don't give up it's a nice heartwarming story filled with love and emotions keep up the great work and thanks for the story

The needs of the few out weigh the needs of the many. It’s a good story, mate.

cool

Now that cliffhanger hurts, I respect that though. Nice chapter.
I've always felt that Gravity Falls was their home.

Interesting direction. Not the one I would've gone since I think the sibling aspect adds enough layers to it in my opinion but okay.

And another great chapter congrats
I'll be witing for next chapter

Absolutely love it and can't wait for the next chapter in about like 3 months, lol. Already favourited and following!

AH THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING THIS STORY GIVES ME LIFE THANK YOU

Hello there,
now after using my whole evening and half of my night to read this FanFiction, I also want to give a bit of feedback. Gratulations on writing such a story! :)
Overall I have to say that I liked this story and enjoyed it reading.

I honestly thought that the big reveal at the end will be an incredible, yet possible plot twist concerning Dipper's and Mabel's blood-relation - that they actually ARE related and only thought that they aren't. I thought this was going to happen since they actually never talked with their birth about their parents before and "only" had the albums and the birth-certificates as an evidence. What if the doctor made a typo, making the certificates saying that Mabel was born at 12:34 and Dipper at 22:39, but actually he was born at 12:39? What if there was a third album with photos of them as babies? It would still be possible due to them having the same birthday and looking similar. And so on. It's sheer incredible to imagine how many problems and conflicts this would have brought up. Enough to fill a whole sequel. But the way you ended it is fine as well.

This story was a bit more serious (almost dark-toned) than I'm used to. For my personal taste it lacked a bit of humour. It may be due to my personality but I like humour even in a bit more darker toned stories. Particularly Gravity Falls has this goofy and silly, yet brilliant humour between the characters which is one of the reasons why I love this series so much. Seeing a more serious story around Dipper and Mabel is quite unusual. But as I said: Adding humour is just a personal taste.

One thing that bothered me a bit were some of the character's reactions. For sure is jealousy a trait that can poison even a good relationship, but even in my worst experiences jealousy lasted only for a short amount of time. Dipper got jealous of Mabel meeting with Jason, that's fine and believable - but him being jealous for whole months is in my opinion not realistic. Dipper is (as far as I remember) not that sensitive and a sorehead.
Particularly his reaction towards Wendy and Stan when he and his "sister" returned to Gravity Falls in winter was not realistic to me - in those scenes he snarled at them, even though they are humans with a great meaning in his life, besides he lacked the nostalgia and the pure excitement of exploration towards Gravity Falls he should have had (except I am missing something from your story).
Some of the reactions were a bit too dramatic and a bit too much in my opinion.

Other than that must I say that you brought your OC's well into the story. They are merely side-characters and don't steal the focus from Mabel and Dipper but still add something new and good to the story - particularly Anna and her attempts to apologize for seducing Dipper in her alcoholized state. Dippers statement to people showing their real nature when drunk is 100% true and something you brought very well to live.

If you need any further feedback to your story or parts of it please send me a PM.
Greets, KorneliusPrisma

Great story congratulation
I realy hope you will cntinue this can't wait for next chapter

Update where ever it is that you update or I will kidnap your desk, like you said not to.

Update or I'll bang your girlfriend!

I love this story so far