This is all so poetically beautiful. The raw emitions nearly broke my heart and I was close to tears so many times through the read. The structure is impeccable and the jumping between timelines so wonderfully paced-scene from past and present seamlessly woven together to paint a perfect picture. This story touches something so deep that after reading it left its mark in my heart. And I think it's amazing that you tackled the theme of ever-passing time and the lost-and-gains of life while telling an intriguing and touching story. Thank you so much for writing!

*cries* this is *sniff* so good

I love this entire story from beginning to end, or open ending. There aren't enough words to able to express all the great details here. It was like reading a short, well written novel that was funny and sweet. I would come back to rad this again and again. Bravo! :)

So beautiful. It's great how you're able to capture so much feeling and tell so much of the story (characters, feelings, experiences and events that have occurred) without really telling too much. You're able to express so much in just one chapter.
To me, sometimes authors add a little TOO much detail and information to the stories so that sometimes it seems too overt and immature writing. However you've perfected the art subtle storytelling and it's amazing.
Definitely one of my favorite stories!

Cute story!

omg this is so beautiful. I keep coming back to this. This is lovely. Lovelier than lovely. Breaks my heart in a nice way every time I read it. It's so beautiful. SO beautiful. I want to wail and cry - it's so beautiful. I'm so glad you wrote it - that someone wrote it, and I got to read it. Thank you so much for writing this, darling. So grateful to you. Please do not ever remove it from your ff. It's beautiful and it's lovely. And it's helped me so much. God bless you!

THIS IS THE GREATEST AND LOVELIEST KLAROLINE FANFIC EVER.
IT MAKES MY HEART SOAR AND BREAK AS WELL.
PLEASE PLEASE LET THERE BE SEQUEL OR MORE AWESOME KLAROLINE STORIES FROM YOU.
IT'S LIKE EVERY WORD IS SO BEAUTIFUL.
SORRY FOR SO MANY CAPS. I AM JUST SO EXCITED ABOUT THIS FIC.!
OH MY GOD...

Wow, sweet, tortured, brilliant story. I loved every word of this. She doesn't love fairy tales because she knows she can't live one. So she tells real stories but she's grown up enough to give herself the chance to change them when she has enough hope, experience or whatever to realise she might be wrong.

To be honest, I really hate Hayley and the whole baby plot so I wasn't sure I could read you story, but you have such a wonderful way to write, which forces us to feel this story, the suffering of the characters and it's a very interesting idea, it's different from what I usually read but it is a really good story, each paragraph is more surprising that the last!

Outstanding!

Beautiful story. Very lovely.

HOLY GUACAMOLE THAT WAS MARVELOUS

This work deserves a standing ovation. I admit that I am one who does not venture much into fanfics such as these because they are so different from the ones that I usually read. But I swear, I found myself in tears, reminiscing everything that has come to pass while reading this. Saying this was beautifully written is an understatement. The subtleness , the sincerity, the quietness of the piece is mesmerizing. And if only there was a way I could give an infinite number of favorites for this, I would. :)

Omg this was exquisitely beautiful! Usually I don't like Klaroline baby fics but this is probably my favourite. Loved the way you wrote the characters, I mean the whole story had such a natural flow with this undercurrent of melancholia and bittersweetness. Good job!

I'm in love with this story, so absolutely beautiful and touching