I love this!
The doujin too, it brought me here looking for Marco/ Ace fics (｡•ｏ•｡)っ.ﾟ｡･

So adorable! I was so having the feels for Ace when Marco said no the first time and that scene at the brothel?! Amazing! I pouted in all honesty when it ended…though I have to say I am curious on your take of how Marco would react if Ace revealed he was a virgin...lol, that would make a hilarious Omake!

YES that doujin is amazing! I love it! This was absolutely amazing! Marco trying to be resilient and Ace just come on~! I love the bit of drama and cockblocking is fun and you did just the right amount! Loved! Thanks for sharing!

This is a lovely story!
Keep up the good work!

Lovely story! The amount of cock-blocking was just right to make your readers (and Ace) frustrated, but the love scene came at the right point. As you said in your authors note, I would also only critize that the actual sex part has a lack of details. Maybe you should try to "slow down" all the actions done by the characters in your mind (although it is maybe heated and hasted), in order to see them more clearly and to describe them more detailed.

was really sweet and heart aching xD there was some small spelling errors but nothing too bad :D

FAN!

I Also read torch wich made me love this pairing

I really like how you have Marco's personality I really think he is gentle but Ace can make that crack can't he

THAT WAS PERFECT!