Reviews for what doesn't kill you makes you stronger
SharonE chapter 12 . 8/9/2018
Nice, update soon please?
Rubiksmaniac chapter 12 . 10/18/2014
Continue soon please!
YouJustGotPitchSlapped chapter 11 . 7/25/2014
A pretty good filler chapter I must say :) as long as this is a filler chapter...right?
Loved the interaction between Maria and Beca...dang I wish I could be as nice as her.
Update soon?
Softball life chapter 10 . 6/30/2014
Awesome can't wait for more!
YouJustGotPitchSlapped chapter 8 . 6/22/2014
Just finished the 8 chapters...and I would like to say very well done on this story so far. Like, really well done.
There are so many goddamn medical terms that are absolute gibberish to me but seem very correct, that it seems you have done extensive research to make sure this Hospital story is accurate.
Also, I think it's absolutely brilliant that you have incorporated some shady business into this otherwise normal scene, making it much more interesting to read.
I completely and utterly love how you have portrayed everyone in this, Beca communicates in short and to the point sentences, which I often don't understand half of. I wonder though, will there be music involved at some point in the story?
Chloe, is her usual bubbly self and I think it's fitting that she is in peds. Her friendship is still strong with Aubrey, who although hasn't appeared in the story physically yet, already seems to play a big part in Chloe's life.
As for everyone else, perfectly portrayed. Cynthia Rose is a more matured version of herself (which I love) and Jesse has kept his friendly nature and goofy grins, with his past crushing on Dr. Mitchell, but eventual best-friend relationship with her.

Something I think you should alter is the capitalisation of your title, 'what doesn't kill you makes you stronger'. I think you should switch it to 'What Doesn't Kill you Makes you Stronger' as that shows this story will be punctualised and capitalised throughout each chapter correctly. At first, I decided against clicking on your fan fiction due to the title, but after second thought I clicked as your summary was well phrased and good. I made the right choice.

Aside from the occasional misspelling or typo, this story is beyond excellent in its plot line, characterisation and speech. I hope you update soon, to rid my temporary reading-craving, as I simply cannot wait for another instalment of potentially my favourite fanfiction I have read in a while.

I do hope you do not find any of my criticism offending in anyway, I am just trying to make this even better than it already is.

Apologies for the incredibly long review. I just had to express my opinion on this story, and I feel content now.

Bye! :) x
Guest chapter 7 . 6/14/2014
you're a quick updater love it xox
llvr chapter 6 . 6/14/2014
Hey. You've got something going here in this story. Just a suggestion though. You may want to change your summary to get more people to read this especially since there is another fic ongoing with the premise of your summary. The two store are different though since you have a more of the medical side and problems to go with the story. You may want to reveal that in the summary to differentiate it, since it can be off putting for others if they think they are already reading a similar story. Just my two cents. It may help you get more readers, but I can't be too sure.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/11/2014
I'm pretty much in love with this. I love scenarios where they're both doctors p keep it up! You seem to know your medical shit!
WhoseLine chapter 2 . 6/11/2014
Excellent! I'm very excited about this!
SzandarTheGreat chapter 2 . 6/11/2014
I'm really enjoying this story so far, especially where it can head. I'm also really enjoying the way you write - you paint a very vivid picture and it's very much well written. Can't wait for the next chapter!