Reviews for Before He Leaves
Guest chapter 6 . 10/18/2018
You kinda left out the part where Castle caught Beckett in a lie during the Demming fiasco.
Guest chapter 7 . 6/22/2018
Castle you are such a sap you actually believe her bullshit move on castle she is pathetic no man wants that kind shit in his life
Guest chapter 7 . 1/28/2018
Please write more of this story.
sianita95 chapter 7 . 5/25/2016
Holy crap i know it's a long shot after two years but i wish this was 'complete' but i thoroughly understand that life gets real sometimes. Great story wish i could read more!
bfox1973 chapter 7 . 10/20/2015
Any chance you are going to finish this? I prefer it to this season
Disneynut chapter 7 . 6/12/2015
I just found this story this morning, love it by the way! Anyway, I'm wondering, what happened? Why did it stop there and why didn't you complete the story?
47secondsofveritas chapter 7 . 6/2/2015
Not fair, buddy! I want the rest of it, if you have it? T_T
maeyat chapter 7 . 5/28/2015
Update this please.
MooseandSquirrel chapter 7 . 11/26/2014
There HAS to be more.

Enjoyed the characterization and the willingness to be open with each other. (Sigh, a full season early.) Appreciated the idea of the book tour. Since when does RC not go on book tours?
xfbikerchick chapter 7 . 8/17/2014
I really like you opening Beckett up emotionally in this storyline. I hope to see you finish it.
WillTCastle chapter 7 . 8/13/2014
This is exquisitely written. I have seen a few writers try to attempt a proper heart-to-heart conversation between Kate and Rick, where both of them put everything on the line for the other's benefit, their fears, apprehensions, the mistakes they have made and the chances they have missed. Of course, various writers try to attempt this conversation at different stages of their relationship/different timelines during the show's run, some manage to do a good job wrt the content and details of the conversation while others fall a bit short in that respect.
In my mind, this piece is one of he best I have read because of the comprehensive nature of the events you have chosen (I seriously can't think of more critical events that did/could have defined the way their relationship progressed) and the honesty that the characters have exhibited towards admitting their mistakes and explaining their POV wrt the decisions they ended up making at those junctures.
Another thing which makes this a wonderful piece is the balanced way in which you have been able to explain both the characters POV, without any prior bias (Which a lot of the writers end up doing sometimes subconsciously). Both the characters have been given a fair chance to say what is one their minds in a rational and logical manner, something that two mature adults looking to establish a long-term stable relationship would do. Their conversation just seems so natural and realistic, with both acknowledging the others' views while saying their own piece, something which happens rarely on the show and in only a few stories written for this fandom. As a reader, I get a comprehensive understanding of the characters' actions and can empathize with them, instead of thinking of one as the culprit and the other as a victim. Their misgivings and mistakes do seem genuine and you can see them coming out of this better.
Finally, every single one of the events they have discussed thus far, they seem to be in sync recognizing when it is their turn to fill the gaps and when to just listen and support. Not to mention, as I previously stated, they are owning up to the mistakes they made or the chances they missed on their own in each of those instances. And unlike what tends to happen in a lot of the stories, it is great credit to your understanding of the characters and the events, that you have perfectly judged which event corresponds to whose mistake, without any bias. Only some of the best writers in the fandom are able to achieve that and you deserve great kudos for doing justice to these characters.
Looking forward to reading from you and soon.

Take care and keep writing.

Regards,
Will
Guest chapter 7 . 7/25/2014
Really enjoy this. But isn't it true that even without Castle's meddling or even his existence, Raglan would have made his "dying of cancer" confession, which is what lead to Kate being shot? I never understand why no one has Kate point that out to Castle in these discussions.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/24/2014
Greta story
Starla26 chapter 7 . 7/26/2014
this is amazing. please please continue!
Beetlebug chapter 7 . 7/26/2014
They are communicating! Talking and being honest are good. Looking forward to more.
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