Reviews for A dangerous trap
Guest chapter 50 . 1/9/2017
Really glad I read through this all. So many twists I this story! And such a beautiful ending. Thank you so much for taking the time in completing this.
Guest chapter 32 . 1/9/2017
Wow. This chapter is all kinds of fucked up.
Guest chapter 16 . 1/9/2017
Kind of thought it strange that Shizuo, being a client of a therapist, would know he name and feelings of Namie's little brother. It's just so random and doesn't make any sense why that was even included. Also, you've written Shinra as very annoying and out of character. We all know he loves Celty, but he isn't overly obsessed in that she's all he talks about. And excuse me if I'm wrong, but I thought Kanra had visited Shizuo in the hospital and threatened him that Erika was next to be killed? If she was never Izaya, then why would she have said that? Unless you plan on revealing that she really was working for Izaya? Her character reveal is also very strange. These were just a few of the things that stood out to me so far that I didn't really like. Hopefully the story will clarify my concerns as it goes on. Other than that, the story seems to be developing nicely. I'm interested in seeing what's to happen.
Kitty chapter 50 . 3/24/2016
This is the only fan fiction that I've ever cried to, I loved everything about this fic and I hope you write more :-)
Mahou-ShibaInu chapter 50 . 11/23/2015
Oh my oh my oh my. Happy Ending yay! Happy endings with shizaya make me happy! Pain and suffering and then happy ending is even better! You almost killed me there though, when Izaya "died" I thought it was really him and that he had given up because Shizuo refused him and that was his end game. I was informed there was to be a Happy Ending where is it?! But to my relief and pleasant surprise he did not die and Shizu-Shizu and Iza-Iza and everyone else lives happily ever after~~~! Happy Happy! Wonderfuuuuullll~~~! Thank you wonderful author! YesYes!
Gomerah chapter 50 . 5/26/2015
I don't know how, but u got me to cry haha lol thanks for the story. I have never read such a detailed and we'll written Shizaya or Izuo story before. Keep it up if your still weighting :D
taimukipa chapter 50 . 9/29/2014
I'm so very happy with how you ended this story. I can't say just how emotionally attached I'd gotten to this story before I had read the first part of chapter 50, I was heartbroken but I'm so glad it all worked out in the end! It was a great story and I'm glad Ic am across it, keep up the good work :)
PassingBye chapter 50 . 9/20/2014
This is the best story I have read :D
Rararararararararararara chapter 50 . 9/18/2014
OMG SO MANY FEELS! I'm so happy right now, first i cried at Izaya's 'situation' (spoilers XP) then i felt sad for Shizuo, then i cried again with happiness, laughed at the chase scene and felt all fuzzy wuzzy inside at the end 3 you are one of my all time fave fanfic writers, so please, continue making your magic like you always do, i love each and every one of your stories and i look forward to your next works :3
freez chapter 49 . 9/16/2014
I'm sobbing! I live this story so much! It's late here but I'm ranting in my next review about your awesomeness.
Digital Lady 606 chapter 49 . 9/13/2014
Will he find Izaya?
mslunarissa chapter 48 . 9/11/2014
In case your an author who tends to respond to their reviews here is my fanfiction tag. It's the same as other one just not a link.
mslunarissa chapter 48 . 9/11/2014
After all we, as readers, just went through Izaya better take his psychotic little ass back in that house and let Shizu-Chan apologize for his stupidity. On a lighter note, I truly enjoy this story. So much so I'm choosing to leave a review. A rare feat all things considering. I hope this story never ends ,nonetheless; I just want Shizu-Chan HAPPY with both his heart and soul by his side. Is that too much to ask? Lastly, I must applaud you for writing as story with this sort of dynamic. Not many prefer Izuo as a match when Shizaya seems to be the crowd favorite. So thank you! Good luck!
Digital Lady 606 chapter 47 . 9/9/2014
Punishment, huh?
Freez chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
I've become a little obsessive over this story. I checked about ten times today to see if you had updated. Thank you! Very soon I will re-read this and then give you all of the reviews that you rightfully deserve, but I normally read this on my phone and it sucks.
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