I'm really enjoying this

Yay! They're safe for now! I was literally on the edge of my seat! Keep this up!

I hope Onii-chan Kizami doesn't die. Don't ask me why. I have my reasons.

Yay they're safe...well kinda...

This is so awesome! :D I love this so far, please continue it! Its awesome! :)

Ahh, the gory descriptions fit right in with Corpse Party.

Poor Yuka

Omg Yuka got caught by Kizami.
Worse he tore up her piece of the Sachiko doll.
She can't ever leave and has to stay,with Kizami eating humans
Eew.
Hope Morishige can at least take her away from Kizami .
Also take to see her brother Satoshi once more.
Come hurry up Morishige!
You can protect yourself at least.
Let's hope you won't end up like in the anime.
Mayu where are you ?Morshige is searching for ya!
I love this chapter and poor Yuka getting her feet cut at the heel.
Till next chapter
Codebreakeryuuki

Woah, you can just totally imagine Kizami in the corner with this knife by his waist; lurking in the shadows. Morishige is gonna die a gruesome death, if Kizami has already plotted when he was gonna strike.

Lovin' the chapters, update soon!

Mayu is going to the other wing of the school...
Let's hope she is in the same dimension as Morshige and Yuka.
Let's hope she be ok.
Kizami...
He really wants Yuka to be with him even he wants to her to lose the ability to walk.
Nice touch.
He just waiting for the time to strike
Can't wait for the next one.
Codebreakeryuuki

Interesting chapter, friend. Cant wait till the next one

Crap...Kizami knows and is after them...
Not good for them.
Yay Mayu alive !
I wonder how she survived all this time...
Yuka finally went to the bathroom!Finally the moment we all were waiting for !
Took her long enough thanks to Morishige!
Don't worry Yuka and Morshige you will your love ones eventually:D
Can't wait for more !
Codebreakeryuuki

Thank god he didn't went crazy that much yet.
Yuka at least is safe for now with Morishige.
Let's hope they don't run into Kizami again.
Can't wait for more!
Codebreakeryuuki

Just one thing to improve it, give a new person a new line when they start to speak, it makes things much easier to read.

Loving it so far. A fanfic with good grammar and isnt more yoshikiXayumi/yaoi(satoshiXyoshiki/kizamiXkurosaki) or yuri(SeikoxNaomi). Its unique. Its original.