a little disappointed Remus didn't use the werewolf inside him to scare Draco more (considering he didn't really seem scared at all) but...*le sigh* alas

you would think a werewolf threatening a teenage boy would put the fear of God in him...

and I think Lupin is a bit justified in his pettiness that Hermione continues to call him Remus when she called Severus dad like...in the 4th chapter or something. its like...she doesn't want to progress further in the relationship. its not like Remus nor Severus had a choice in giving her up. it was her best chance.

so what exactly IS Remus to Hermione? She can call Severus "Dad" for half of the book but yet she continues to call the other parent by his given name? so I guess just fuck Remus, he doesnt matter. She doesn't really consider HIS feelings or anything. She always going to Severus. That bugs me a little bit.

anyway I'm almost done, gotta keep reading.

WHAT? Remus gave a birth? BUT HE IS A MAN... So many questions... WHAT?

Well it was really cute

I think I read the original version of this story. So, I was psyched to see this being completed. I am enjoying it and look forward to finishing it. Thanks!

Really loved this! A couple of the chapters had me in tears, while others had me laughing. This is definitely going on my favorites list.

Just to let you know...I loved this story. I laughed and I cried and that's a plus in my book. Excellent job at taking another's start and making it your own! I really enjoyed seeing a happier and loving Snape. Again, I enjoyed it very much.

I really enjoyed this. I don't usually read slash, but this was well written.

Even though I still don’t see Remus with Severus, (Sirius, James, or someone else) it was a sweet story. Loved it. Thank you for sharing!

Wow,
This fanfiction was spectacular,
I really liked it, and you did a good job with it !
It was hm heart-warming, I loved the relation between Severus and Hermione, It made me cry when you wrote those chapters where they are «fighting».
I did love the way you wrote the fanfic,( the fact that for one time it's Hermione severus' Child and not Harry was pretty cool ) and I really liked that sometimes it was the point of view of Harry, Greg, Ron, Mione, Sev, Remus, etc and not always the same person

Well Done !
And thanks for sharing this story with us
(Sorry if I made some fault, I am still learning English)

Personally, I don't really like that they had another daughter after they just got Hermione back, and naming her Persephone Eileen...idk it's just too close to Hermione Jean imo. I think her jealousy is quite understable. Myself and six of my siblings are adopted and five of us have moved out now, and once I moved out my parents applied to be foster parents again and brought in a family group of five more and I can honestly say I feel the exact same way Hermione did. However, I am content with how the story ended, it is a very well written story.

How could they do that to Hermione? She barely got her parents back before they had another kid and pushed her aside! Her jealousy is well justified! She is supposed to be their little girl, not some little MISTAKE.

This is a fantastic read well done

Wow, this just... wow. This is the first mpreg fix I've read, and moreover it's the first RL/SS HP/GG fics too. Honestly now I'm very interested in reading more of its kind. As someone actively trying (and struggling) to get pregnant, I have to wonder about the mechanics of it all. Where exactly are the male eggs stored, and where would they implant? How would they deliver?

I loved your story! Please keep writing.